So as I mentioned in a previous post, I read the first chapter of Impossible Takes a Little Longer to the writing group. Some of the criticism I don’t think was significant: people listening rather than reading frequently have trouble following what’s happening (sometimes my fault for mispronouncing a word or two). Others I will definitely consider.
KC’s powers drew a particular amount of attention. I’d thought showing her in action (speed, strength, bulletproof) would define her powers, but several listeners seemed to want them spelled out. Several thought that her powers made her invincible. I hadn’t thought of that (she’s not that amazing by classic comics standards) though it’s true she does take down the Aryan Druidic Front easily. But that was intentional as this chapter is mostly set-up, a relatively routine night in the life of a super-hero. Still there may be something to it.
A couple of people were thrown that I have not only super-powers but magic in my world. Which surprised me, because in a comics universe, of course you have magic, and super-tech, and mythological gods along with super-powers … but not everybody is a comics fan, so I can see how that might seem weird.
I also got some objections to Nighthawk’s name. I honestly don’t remember why I picked it, though I do rationalize it later in the book. But as KC’s orientation is to protect, to guard people, something that captures that feeling would work better. The trouble is, none of the names I can think of (Guardian, Protector, Defender) really sing. Shield does (and it has a long history in comics; that might appeal to KC) but the MCU pretty much has a lock on it.
Some people didn’t like that she has a past with sexual abuse in it. Which is no surprise, it’s more of an issue now than when I wrote the first version 20 years back. But it’s also so deeply woven into some of the scenes, I’m not sure I can take it out without way more rewriting than I want to do.
So all in all, a lot to think about. Don’t know when I’ll get to do anything with it, given my limited fiction-writing time.







