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Critiquing the Impossible (#SFWApro)

So as I mentioned in a previous post, I read the first chapter of Impossible Takes a Little Longer to the writing group. Some of the criticism I don’t think was significant: people listening rather than reading frequently have trouble following what’s happening (sometimes my fault for mispronouncing a word or two). Others I will definitely consider.

KC’s powers drew a particular amount of attention. I’d thought showing her in action (speed, strength, bulletproof) would define her powers, but several listeners seemed to want them spelled out. Several thought that her powers made her invincible. I hadn’t thought of that (she’s not that amazing by classic comics standards) though it’s true she does take down the Aryan Druidic Front easily. But that was intentional as this chapter is mostly set-up, a relatively routine night in the life of a super-hero. Still there may be something to it.

A couple of people were thrown that I have not only super-powers but magic in my world. Which surprised me, because in a comics universe, of course you have magic, and super-tech, and mythological gods along with super-powers … but not everybody is a comics fan, so I can see how that might seem weird.

I also got some objections to Nighthawk’s name. I honestly don’t remember why I picked it, though I do rationalize it later in the book. But as KC’s orientation is to protect, to guard people, something that captures that feeling would work better. The trouble is, none of the names I can think of (Guardian, Protector, Defender) really sing. Shield does (and it has a long history in comics; that might appeal to KC) but the MCU pretty much has a lock on it.

Some people didn’t like that she has a past with sexual abuse in it. Which is no surprise, it’s more of an issue now than when I wrote the first version 20 years back. But it’s also so deeply woven into some of the scenes, I’m not sure I can take it out without way more rewriting than I want to do.

So all in all, a lot to think about. Don’t know when I’ll get to do anything with it, given my limited fiction-writing time.

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Undead sexist cliches: Prosecuting rape is an attack on men

This cliche is truly a very, very old chestnut—that making rape charges is a tool women use to destroy innocent men. And therefore getting aggressive about rape prosecution puts innocent men through hell.

I’m not sure who first said “rape is an easy charge to make but a hard one to prove” but that was the staple view for years. A woman would make up rape charges because the man didn’t call the next day. Or because he broke up with her and she wanted to get even. Or because she was asking for it, he provided it and then the slut changed her mind. I remember a case from the 1980s where the lawyer for the rapist professed outrage over a verdict that a woman could actually go up to a man’s apartment, make out and then choose not to have sex—how was it unreasonable for the guy to make her have sex?

From some TV shows and movie I remember back in the 1970s, people apparently thought it was plausible that a woman would threaten to make rape accusations when there was no sex involved: to force someone to give them money, to discredit an obnoxious official, to force a detective to back off from asking them questions. The reality that rape was more likely to leave the woman discredited and slut-shamed was never touched on.

Warren Farrell, one of the veterans of the men’s rights movement, claimed in one of his books that based on his totally objective research, as many as 100 percent of rape accusations might be false (edited to get the right figure). Of course, Farrell also believed being cock-teased and being fired were just as traumatic for a man as rape was for a woman, so it’s possible he’s biased.

While society is a lot better at thinking about and prosecuting rape than it used to be, the argument still crops up. Right-winger Mona Charren asserted once that any date-rape charge is a lie: the woman simply woke up in the morning, couldn’t deal with the fact she was now a slutty, slutty tramp, and went into denial. Or Todd Akin with his conviction that if the victim got pregnant, it wasn’t a legitimate rape. And James Taranto has complained that making an issue of sexual assault in the military is, indeed, an attack on men and male sexuality.

Which is part of the problem, that men who rape are just doing what comes naturally. That rape is, as Scott Adams put it, as natural as lions eating gazelles. So criminalizing it is totally unfair to men, because they’re just being guys. And a guy can’t be expected to think about shit like consent when he has a hard dick. And you can’t expect him to back off just because maybe the woman’s too drunk or otherwise incapacitated  to say yes. After all, she didn’t say no.

For a recent example we have this recent column by British attorney David Osborne that trying harder to prosecute rape will “have serious consequences for all red-bloodied males who are out on the rut.” After all, the reason most prosecutions fail is because the jury “did not believe beyond a reasonable doubt that the victim did not consent,” which clearly proves not that juries might be biased against victims but the victims are a bunch of liars.

Osborne also finds it “distasteful and unattractive the suggestion that as the victim was blind drunk she therefore unable to give her consent to sex.” In fact, if the victim was drunk or high when the rape happened, that should be a 100 percent bullet-proof defense for her assailant. After all, “you’ve got to bear in mind that walking the streets provocatively dressed can in some circumstances be an invitation to a red blooded bloke.” And how can it be fair to punish red-blooded he-men for doing what comes naturally?

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Political links again

Rep. Tom McClintock explains that if you raise the minimum wage, you’ll shut out minorities’ chance to get employed, just like teenagers. I presume that’s a variation on the usual myth that regular working adults don’t work minimum wage jobs, so it doesn’t have to be high: if you raise the minimum wage, you’re benefiting Those People. Oh, and food stamps are just a bribe to get poor people’s votes.

•Like so many other Republican “moderates,” Jeb Bush isn’t one. Specifically he’s a hard-core enthusiast for American world domination. But frankly I can’t see that turning off enough people to really affect the race.

•Repub Dave Brat argues we can get schools into shape by bringing in CEOs and private sector personnel. Which will presumably mean that the CEOs will suck up all the money, pay will get slashed and the services will be shit. And it seems Brat’s a Ph.D and former economics professor himself.

•A woman in Idaho assaults a Jewish neighbor to force her to convert to Christianity.

•Conservative columnist Patrick Howley writes about how he gets some respect from black people, but then wimpy white liberals cause him to lose it all because all blacks see is that they’re both white so therefore, both wimps! Signs of wimpiness include reading in a black neighborhood, reading Emily Dickinson and ordering chicken salad. Howley previously wrote about how the oppressive federal government is plotting to make women miserable by making it a crime for men to check out a woman’s rack.

•In 2011, 10 young white teenagers murdered a black man in Jackson, Miss., solely because of his race. It wasn’t their first assault. At their sentencing, the judge Carlton Reeves, had a lot to say, and it’s worth reading.

•Comcast promises many things about its merger with Time-Warner, but it’s not willing to improve its Internet Essentials program which provides very limited Internet access to the poor.

•The League of the South wants to celebrate the death of Lincoln.

•Police assault a 57-year-old Indian man for walking in a white suburb.

•A look at the New York Times’ Maureen Dowd and her history of manufacturing quotes or critiquing Obama’s performance compared to how movie characters to.

•In the name of transparency, Jeb Bush releases a big cache of emails from his time as governor … including lots of personal data and Social Security numbers. Consumerist looks at the legal issues involving public records and Social Security numbers.

•G. Willow Wilson on her faith.

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Identity Crisis coda: The downward spiral of Dr. Light (#SFWApro)

As I’ve written before, second stringers such as John Stewart and Green Arrow can sometimes make it into the A-list, as much by blind chance as innate quality. Dr. Light shows the reverse is true: once a minor A-list villain at DC, he became first a joke, then a monster.

justiceleague12Dr. Light impressed me with his first appearance (cover art by Murphy Anderson, all rights with current holder) for his super-villainous pragmatism: rather than steal stuff, then deal with the Justice League when they come after him, he launches a pre-emptive strike, banishing them to parallel worlds designed to neutralize their powers. Only with them gone does he kick off his plans for world conquest.

His plan did not, of course, work, so in his next appearance he takes another novel step. atom8Rather than go after the League again, he decides to take out the individual members, one at a time. Seriously, this was a rare bit of logical thinking back in the Silver Age. His first victim was new member the Atom (as Pat’s Silver Age Comics notes, Atom covers favored death traps tailored to his small size). He followed that with taking on Green Lantern, Flash, Superman, then the Teen Titans, none of it with much success (he also did end up taking on the whole team a couple of times). Still, if not a great super-villain, he was someone you could count on for a solid scheme and a readable story (cover by Gil Kane, rights with current holder)

But then Marv Wolfman did his terrific reboot of the Teen Titans, and brought in Dr. Light as leader of a recurring adversary team, the Fearsome Five. A short-lived leader: he proves incompetent as a leader and his own team soon write him off and kick him out. I have no idea whether Wolfman genuinely thought Light was a dork or if he simply needed a buffoon villain and pulled Dr. Light’s name out of a hat, so to speak.

Either way, it was the beginning of a downward spiral. With subsequent appearances, Dr. Light become increasingly inept, increasingly cowardly, totally unable to beat anyone (the children of the Golden Age team the Blue Boys kick his butt in one story).

And then came Identity Crisis, which explained his decline as the result of Zatanna trying to mind-control him. With the mind-spell broken in the course of the story, he regained his old forcefulness … but of course, instead of Dr. Light the boob, he was Dr. Light, the rapist thug, which makes him even more unpalatable.

The New 52 reboot introduced a new Dr. Light in the Justice League of America, a good guy who gets zapped by an out-of-control Superman during the Trinity War. I have no idea where he went from there but he had nowhere to go but up.

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Because they’re Republicans, that’s why (and other links)

•An outraged blogger insists President Obama threatening to veto legislation is proof he’s a tyrant!

•Rand Paul is against net neutrality, and is convinced he’s seen vaccines turn kids autistic. I can understand why Repubs would oppose the HPV vaccine as it relates to S-E-X, but other vaccines?

•Lindsey Graham worries that Congressional efforts to ban abortion will once again bring up issues of legitimate rape. I’m sure given the current crop of Republicans, he’s right. Meanwhile, we have a Montana lawmaker who’d like to ban yoga pants. And Florida lawmakers who want to mandate high-schoolers and middle-schoolers watch D’Nesh D’Souza’s film about America because it’s so gosh-darn patriotic. Meanwhile, in Colorado, two state pols think kids shouldn’t be able to seek counseling or get health-care without parental approval.

•Rick Perry wants you to know that Abraham Lincoln was a small-government, states-rights guy, just like Perry. Perry, of course, was wrong. Meanwhile Kansas Repub governor Sam Brownback’s tax-slashing measures have killed the state’s economy, so what else can he do but allow the state government to discriminate against gays. Other governors are pushing for tax increases—on the poor (LGM wonders if this will enable them to pretend they’re fighting economic injustice).

•Wisconsin governor Scott Walker tries to make it official that the purpose of education is to create workers, not to expand knowledge or understanding. More here. Oh, and he also lied and claimed the state’s teacher of year was fired because of union rules (it wasn’t the teacher of the year, and the real teacher of the year says it had more to do with budget cutbacks).

•The EEOC has charged Sara Lee with discriminating against black workers and giving them the most hazardous jobs (working where they’re exposed to asbestos, for instance)

•Conservatives fight back against the environment!

•A preacher compares his refusal to accept gays to the struggle of the Israelites against the Philistine armies. He will not bend the knee to Goliath! At the link, slacktivist suggests even homophobes deserve a better fantasy.

•The American Family Association assures everyone that it doesn’t agree with the views of Bryan Fischer, its long-time spokesman … although he’s still writing for the AFA blog, talking on AFA talk radio …

•Conservatives, as you’re probably aware, are horrified by the brutality of the ISIS Islamic extremists … except when the victim is a Palestinian rights activist. Then she deserved it (related column here).

•Former New York Mayor Michael Bloomberg informs us that stop-and-frisk was a great, life-saving policy, pot will rot your brain (it’s much, much worse than when he smoked it years ago!), and waiters in New York can make $100,000 a year easy.

•Consumerist prints a couple of good articles on the drawbacks to the proposed Comcast/Time-Warner merger. Here’s a great example of Comcast service: A customer sent them her rent check by mistake, made out to someone else and for more than the cost of the bill. The company cashed it and refused to refund the money until the media got in.

•Dessert is really a money-loser for most restaurants.

•Despite filing bankruptcy and closing half its store (with the resultant loss of jobs), Radio Shack can still find $3 million for extra executive bonuses. My old chain, Freedom did the same thing (but with even more bonuses) when it filed Chapter 11. Because they had to retain valued employees (which says a lot about what they thought of the rest of us, who got the 5 percent pay cut).

•The DOJ has a way to mimic cell towers to scoop up cell-phone data. Privacy advocates would like some details on the program, but DOJ is stalling.

•The people who insisted winning the Vietnam War was a vital US interest were wrong. Let’s not forget that.

•Geico is accused of discriminating against California customers based on marital status, level of education and other factors not allowed under California law.

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Always expect the unexpected … but then what? (#SFWApro)

I’ve mentioned before that “always expect the unexpected” is good advice for freelancers. Both in the upbeat sense (be ready for unplanned opportunities) and the negative (be ready for setbacks you don’t see coming).

Though reflecting on the kind of unexpectedness that cropped up the past week or two makes me wonder how good that advice really is.

I can expect the unexpected in the sense of knowing it’s going to happen eventually. The car needs to be taken in. One of us gets sick. Contractors have to work on the house. We need extra cash for something. But knowing that, what do I do?

Some things I can do, sure. Build up savings. Give myself more time than I think I’ll need to finish a project (if I’d based the deadline for my time-travel book on when I initially thought I’d be done I’d be in deep shit by now). If I have a deadline, get more work done up front.

But this can’t be a cure-all. For one thing, getting ahead simply becomes the new normal. If I save up and then have to spend down (as I did when Demand Media was off-line last year), I never do this with a sense of “Well, this is what I saved all the money for, so relax!” I hate seeing my emergency reserves go down. Same with time: if I’m two weeks ahead, I want to stay two weeks ahead—if I lose time so I’m only one week ahead, I feel like I’m a week behind.

And in the short-term, day-to-day, week-to-week, expecting the unexpected doesn’t help. It’s the whole statistics vs. individuals thing: I can predict that I’ll lose time and miss days over the next six months, but I can’t predict specifically that next Tuesday I’ll be doing X so I’d better put in extra work Sunday. And just putting in extra time every week to stay ahead doesn’t work for me at all—I tried that when I was younger, and usually wound up burning out and doing nothing for a while (writing, of course, wasn’t my day job back then so I could afford it).

In the end, all I can really do is accept that problems will arise and roll with them.

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A somewhat chaotic Valentine’s Day with TYG definitely beats a perfect Feb. 14 all alone (#SFWApro)

When I mentioned we had car trouble a week and a half back, I was being rather oblique. The truth is, TYG got hit; she’s fine, thank goodness, but the car was totaled (hence sucking up most of my focus and time that day). Everyone’s clear it wasn’t her fault, and everyone’s been cooperative so she decided not to talk about it online so nobody would take offense (and even now, I’m not giving details). This is relevant to the story of Feb. 14.

Story begins Friday night when TYG had an unrelated non-car accident and sprained her ankle. So we spent much of Friday night at the emergency care. And while she can walk fine in an air boot and is healing fast, she’s not up to walking Plush Dog, who pulls vigorously. So I’m walking both dogs.

Which explains why Valentine’s Day was … busy.

Up, walk two dogs, grab fast breakfast.

Go to car place, where we found our replacement vehicle (we’re pretty pleased,though I’m going to miss the seat warmers this time of year).

Come back, walk dogs.

Take Plush Dog to vet for possible pain problems (conclusion: nothing serious but he’s on anti-inflammatories just in case).

Go out food shopping as we couldn’t do it Friday night.

Walk dogs.

Then the romance kicked in as we went out to dinner at Sage, one of our favorite restaurants here. I’ve never had a bad meal there.

Then home … and the power went out. Followed by marshaling our flashlights, recharging cell phones off our computers, and wondering how cold it would get (fortunately it came on after a few hours). Plus the last walk of the day—man, I’d forgotten how dark it gets when the sky is overcast and there’s no human light. Good to remember for writing, sometimes.

So no chance to post (time-travel reviews will be Monday). And quite exhausting. But still much, much, much more joy than sitting around wondering why I’m always alone on Valentine’s Day. So thanks, TYG.

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Trapped, tangled, but still productive (#SFWApro)

metamorpho9(Cover by Sal Trapani, all rights with current holder) Well, this week was definitely a drop from last week’s performance, but I’m still pleased.

The obstacles to being productive were a morning of errands Monday, and then a dental appointment Tuesday. Just deep cleaning, no surgery, but it was very easy to lose focus afterwards with my lips feeling like they were encased in boxing gloves. And both days there was the vanishing time (“We’ll be leaving any minute, no point in starting something.”) that comes when two people have to work around using one car.

Despite which I did well on my fiction. I made some minor but necessary edits to an old story, The Wodehouse Murder Case; the magazine it sold to is defunct, so I might as well look for a reprint market. I also made some changes to my as-yet unpublished End of the World on the Cutting Room Floor, replacing tough movie thug William Bendix (it’s set in a movie world) with blacksploitation star Jim Brown. I’ve been bothered by how white the story was, and this gives it at least one decent black role. Though of course re-editing required changing the dialogue and then I realized I’d have to replace a minor blacksploitation character in the story (switched him to Tor Johnson from the Ed Wood films).

And I read the first chapter of The Impossible Takes a Little Longer to the writing group. I’ll go into detail on their reactions (generally favorable, but several interesting suggestions) more next week. While I’ve no intention of rewriting the whole book (especially when I only get three hours fiction a week) I do want the opening as strong as possible for any editors or agents who deign to read it.

I did reasonably well on my Demand Media stuff, though not where I should have been. And I submitted a story, but also got one back (with a complimentary send-us-more letter). And published a new And column, on claims refusing to obey court decisions allowing gay marriage is just like refusing to obey pro-slavery rulings 160 years ago.

Plus I got lots of viewing done for my time-travel book.

I’ve also come to the conclusion that getting up and working before my morning routines (stretching out, checking email, breakfast, watching TV) really doesn’t product any soaring burst of productivity. Though I may keep doing it once a week or so just for variety. Or perhaps not.

I may have mentioned we’ve been taking Trixie and the Plush One to obedience class. I’ve added a little bit of training for Trixie to my morning routine, though probably not enough. The dogs are getting much better about sitting together without grappling, so Plushie gets out of his pen much more. Unfortunately, this makes him want out that much more: he’s much more voluble about being penned up now. He goes silent if we feed him, but sometimes he gives me a look like “Food? You think my searing loneliness can be assuaged with FOOD?” Yeah, I’m probably anthropomorphizing.

Another side effect is that I find myself spending more time in the evenings dog-wrangling as it still takes some effort to have them both running loose and not play-fighting. Perhaps they’ll calm down more and then it’ll be less effort. One can dream.

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Identity Crises of Women in Refrigerators, Part Three (#SFWApro)

(Part One and Part Two if you haven’t seen ’em) Before she became a comics writer, Gail Simone coined the phrase “women in refrigerators” to refer to the way some female characters were killed in comics. A “woman in refrigerators” story is one where the woman is brutally murdered, often graphically, but the emphasis isn’t on her: it’s on the gigantic manpain her death causes her husband/boyfriend/father. She’s a McGuffin in someone else’s story. Her fridging is the inspiration for the hero’s grief or revenge or heroism or whatever. For example:

•Shortly after Kyle Rainer acquired his power ring, his girlfriend Alex is murdered and stuffed in a refrigerator by Major Force (the origin of the trope’s name). Ambivalent about being a Green Lantern, he has to man up and prove himself to bring Force to justice.

•Green Lantern villain Star Sapphire hacks and murders Katma Tui, ex-GL. Not because she’s an ex-GL but because of how much pain her death will inflict on Hal Jordan and John Stewart.

•Major Force (again) murders ex-GL Arisia because of the pain it’ll cause super-hero and ex-GL Guy Gardner. I don’t know it’s a particular thing with GLs, more likely just the randomness of my reading choices.

•The Joker shoots and cripples Barbara Gordon, AKA Batgirl, not because she’s Batgirl but as part of a plot against Commissioner Gordon (although she isn’t killed, I think it qualifies).

Like most terms of criticism, there are other definitions, and different victim lists and arguments the whole concept is nonsense. But it’s my blog, so that’s how I’m defining it. And I’ve got to say, Identity Crisis’ treatment of Sue Dibney fits the concept perfectly.

identitycrisis7In the first issue, we get several pages of Ralph discussing what he feels about Sue. Sue herself, we see for a couple of pages, preparing for Ralph to get home. Then she’s dead. Identity Crisis isn’t about Sue, it’s about Ralph’s pain and the grief he and the other heroes feel. By contrast, Firestorm gets to die fighting heroically (and no, Mr. Metlzer, he doesn’t blow up if he’s cut, but that’s a minor point by comparison). Tim Drake’s father goes down fighting and we get several scenes before he dies of him and Tim interacting in the present; Mr. Drake’s there as a person, not as Tim’s memory.

And then there’s the rape scene. While there’s no skin showing, Sue’s pain and suffering is graphically dramatized in her face, her body language—and then the story forgets about her. Nothing about her healing, nothing about her at all until Jean murders her. The importance of the rape isn’t that she was raped, it was that this provoked the JLA to try reprogramming Light, which fuels much of the rest of the plot.

Sue Dibney was fridged. She deserved better.

Cover by Michael Turner, all rights with current holder.

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Identity Crises of Women in Refrigetators, Part Two (#SFWApro)

identitycrisis2Following Part One—cover by Michael Turner, rights with current holder.

I think the mindwipe plotline is what turned me off to Identity Crisis the first time I read it. Partly because it doesn’t quite fit. We have a straightforward murder mystery (who killed Sue?) and of revenge and justice, and then we have the mindwipe plot, which is not, in fact essential: if the Leaguers didn’t tamper with Dr. Light’s mind, he could still have gone after Sue, following his vow to keep punishing the JLA by hitting their loved ones.

This may have been something DC cooked up with Meltzer (it had ramifications in a lot of books) or it may have been his idea. When he wrote the JLA book a while later, he mentioned that he looked forward to taking Silver Age naivete and raising ethical questions about the heroes’ actions. And that rarely works for me. Sure, the Silver Age was naive. Heroes are good, villains are bad, you can trust the system and trust the good guys. The victories are clear, without having to employ morally questionable methods to get them.

But however impractical that may be in real life, I like the ideal. It may be unattainable in real life, but that’s the nature of ideals. And the flip side—cutting questionable deals, doing dirty work in the shadows, tampering with your friends’ minds as well as your enemies—can be just as naive. Sure it sounds very tough to talk about how we have to lower ourselves to the other side’s level, it’s a dirty job but someone has to do it, blah-blah, but that can easily turn into a short-cut: we’ll do the dirty work in the shadows without really questioning whether it’s ethical, or necessary, or if there’s another alternative. Or if working in the shadows even works (the book Legacy of Ashes shows how little use the CIA’s been over the decades). As someone put it online recently, Jack Nicholson’s character in A Few Good Men, snarling that “You need me on that wall!” is a delusional thug—but to some writers, he’s a role model.

It’s one thing if Meltzer wanted to argue the morality of erasing memories when someone learns your secret identity. It’s another to suggest they’ll reprogram Dr. Light and even Batman and try to justify it. That I don’t buy. I also think Meltzer cops out a little by asserting that Batman and Superman know what went down at some level but choose not to know … why the hell would they do that? Particularly Batman?

Rereading though, another problem leapt out at me: the mystery simply doesn’t work. Meltzer’s set it up in classic fashion: Everything points in one direction, then it turns out the solution is completely different (e.g., “We thought it was one of the people he sued—but the killer is the one person he didn’t sue!”). Instead of Dr. Light, it’s Jean.

Trouble is, this only works if a)the first direction looks logical and b)the revelation of the real killer makes perfect sense. This series fails on both counts.

Meltzer emphasizes, repeatedly, how awesome Batman is. Yet somehow the world’s greatest detective misses that Sue hasn’t been flash-fried by a laser, she’s been burned by some sort of flame-thrower. No way do I believe the two effects are the same. No way do I believe Bats would miss that—or Ralph Dibney, but he’s obviously preoccupied by Sue’s death. So the whole plotline of hunting Dr. Light makes no sense at all.

And neither does the unmasking. There’s nothing, absolutely nothing, to indicate that Jean has gone insane (she has had mental problems before, but she was cured and Meltzer doesn’t suggest otherwise). Insanity in a set-up like this is a cheat as it saves Jean having to have a rational motive or doing anything logical like asking Ray out.

Beyond that, there’s the women-in-refrigerators angle, which I’ll get to tomorrow.

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