The Become the Sky ebook goes live Friday on multiple websites and is available for preorder on any of them. As usual, I’ll be blogging about how I came to write the two stories I contributed. This week it’s about Obolos.
Weirdly I can’t find any record on my blog for the story before 2022 even though that post refers to reworking an earlier draft. I’m guessing I worked on the previous draft back before I started this blog, set it aside and only came back to it in 2022. I’m fairly sure I called the early draft something like Don’t Pay the Ferryman but by 2022, I had another story with a similar title. Though it eventually wound up with another title, becoming Shadows Reflected in Darkness in 19-Infinity.
That’s far enough back I can’t swear to my initial inspiration. What I remember is the image of a terrified woman; operating on the fringes of the underworld, she had a sudden attack of ethics and now a mob boss wants her dead. Her only hope is the mysterious Ferryman, a shadowy figure who like Charon ferries people who are effectively dead away to another world. Where? Well, anywhere’s better than dead in New York, which is the only alternative.
My earlier post refers to the previous draft as ending in a hand-wave. That’s typical for me; a lot of times I’ll just pull a first draft ending out of my butt if I can’t think of a good one. That frees my mind to start working on the second draft. Apparently in this case I didn’t get very far.
I do know I bounced around in the details of my protagonist. Rich, self-centered, but at one point she was black or she was a Paris Hilton-type (back when Hilton was a pop-culture name, obviously). Finally she became Eleanor Holt, a young socialite in the 1930s. Using her connections she’d brought people together, like a contractor with several tons of defective steel and a bridge inspector with a very expensive mistress. The people she connected were grateful. Only one such deal had proven bad enough that her ethics had asserted themselves. Now mob boss “Rackets” Lawton was sitting in a cell, there was a $10,000 price on my protagonist’s head and the Ferryman—shadowy and possibly mythical though he is—is the only way out. Because when Rackets Lawton wants you dead, every street out of New York is a dead end.
The 1930s setting was what I needed. It shaped my protagonist, now Eleanor Holt, a rich woman who steals for the adrenalin rush. I’m a huge fan of actress Barbara Stanwyck and my mind used her as a template without any conscious decision on my part. The 1930s tough-dame dialogue came naturally too. The only question … when the Ferryman took Eleanor to safety, where was she going to end up? And what sort of challenge was she going to face?
I’m not going to tell you but I will say it took me a long while to answer both questions. When I did work out the answers, I took the story to my writing group. They liked it but had some good suggestions — some of the backstory was confusing, the ending exposition was a little flat. I worked to fix both.
When we settled on “escape” as the theme of Become the Sky, I knew I’d found a home for the story (at 8,000 words, a lot of markets wont’ take it). If you buy a copy (and why wouldn’t you?), you can read it for yourself.
Covers by Sonya Lano and Kemp Ward (bottom). All rights to images remain with current holders.






















