How not to write about politics (and some related matters)

CNN: “The Senate on Monday passed a major bill to overhaul college athletics with a large bipartisan vote, 77-22.”

That is an impressively bad opening because I have no idea why this is important news. “Major bill” means nothing. “Overhaul college athletics” could mean anything. We get two more paragraphs before we learn the bill will “set national standards for how college athletes can profit on their name, image and likeness.”

We then get a whole boatload of He Says/She Says. Ted Cruz says it offers “simple, commonsense rules.” The NCAA supports it. The AFL-CIO and the NAACP oppose it. It quotes the Toddler saying “It will not only save college sports, it will save the colleges themselves” which adds nothing (is anyone surprised).

I get down 11 paragraphs before I learn anything of substance about the bill, including that it allows the NCAA to regulate player compensation. Given the controversy over this topic, I’d have liked more specifics. Near the end it quotes Cruz saying the bill will protect players’ ability to profit from their name and likeness, which is important. The NCAA has routinely shut down side hustles on the ground the player is (for example) selling art based on their fame as a player, which violates the sacred amateur standards of the multi-million dollar college sports industry. Another sponsor says it will stop colleges from splurging on sports to stay competitive so they can divert money into research or AI (siiiigh) — how does the bill do that? I will note that none of this is new: Rocky and Bullwinkle took shots at college spending on sports back in the 1960s and the 1935 movie Fighting Youth pointed out the contradictions of a big, profitable business that insists the player should do it for free (though this criticism is placed in the mouths of commie subversives).

I took a look at the bill and it’s not so long I wouldn’t have been able to read it if I’d been assigned to cover the story. Obviously a reporter can’t interpret what it means or what the actual effect will be. Even so, some specific quotes from the bill would have grounded it in something other than He Says She Says. For instance, the bill says colleges cannot penalize a player or restrict their eligibility because they made money off their likeness or their name somehow. Cruz saying what his bill does might be spin; seeing the actual words is something else.

There’s also a lot of specific details about financing, which is presumably how colleges will save money. Though I’m curious, given that coaches routinely pull down megabucks (not something that used to be the case), whether it will really divert money away from sports or just from athletes. Which might be more detail that CNN had time to get into.

Still, at least CNN is making a sincere attempt to cover the topic. By contrast, here’s a WaPo headline:

Portraying the Toddler as someone who’s really trying to help us poor, struggling consumers? With ideas like bringing in mystery meat from overseas (supplied by someone Melania Trump knows)? And when it’s his tariffs and his stupid Iran war that are shaping the economic landscape? And as the comment at the bottom says, the headline dances around the Toddler’s complete ineffectiveness — he hasn’t failed, things “have failed so far to pan out.” It’s quite possible the article is better, but given Bezos’ hamfisted handling of the Washington Post, I wouldn’t bet on it.

Bari Weiss, meanwhile, continues to face-palm as head of CBS News. A common argument on the left is that this is new owner David Ellison’s diabolical plan to destroy the media, but as Scott Lemieux says at the link, “there is no evidence for this and plenty of evidence against it. Everything about Weiss’s career suggests that she wants to be an influential propagandist, not somebody who produces a show with declining ratings that nobody likes and is forced to resign in disgrace. She has run a successful group blog pandering to an audience who thinks that Pete Hegseth is the second coming of Clausewitz, and genuinely doesn’t seem to understand that this relatively small sector of Silicon Valley executives and anti-anti-Trump fanatics is not remotely enough to sustain a broadcast news audience. The Ellisons almost certainly have the same delusion, and indeed I would bet a high-end Tiffany bracelet that they sincerely think that Weiss is a mildly contrarian liberal. And the biggest problem of all is that none of them have any respect for the actual craft that goes into TV news, including partisan operations. Making propaganda people want to watch is an art in its own way. Rupert Murdoch understands this and hires people who can execute it.”

I think this has something in common with this comment about decadence.

Which is echoed here.

That includes not appreciating how much skill it takes to do something well. Sure, science can be wrong, medicine can be wrong, regulators make mistakes. This does not mean the opinions of the man in the street are just as good. Or that listening to your Facebook group about the benefits of raw milk for toddlers is a good idea. And contrary to the ever-wrong RFK Jr., AI is not better informed than a good doctor, nor is it essential they consult it.

Case in point, this argument for why school is inherently feminine (posted by Celeste Davis at Matriarchal Blessing)

This is in the first place (and second and third) factually wrong. If men couldn’t obey the military would be a women’s organization. Corporate America would be run by women. Schools for centuries were men only; teachers set the rules and required boys to obey them. And refusing to listen to someone who knows more than you is not “masculine,” it’s stupid. Refusing to learn is in no way admirable.

Despite my reservations about Susan Jacoby’s The Age of American Unreason, she has a point that losing respect for intellectual and practical skill is not a good thing.

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Materials, mystery and enigma: books

STUFF MATTERS: Exploring the Marvelous Materials That Shape Our Man-Made World by Mark Miodownik tackles a variety of topics centering on the materials that surround us: how can a paperclip made of metal bend but not break? How can pure carbon appear as diamonds but also the graphite in pencils? Why does paper fold so well? What makes chocolate so good? Plus chapters on concrete, gels and glass.An interesting work


In the fourth Father Brown collection (I meant to read #3 first but I got it wrong), Father brown is visiting his friend Flambeau, thief-turned-detective, now happily married and retired, when one of the other guests asks THE SECRET OF FATHER BROWN — how is it possible he solves so many cases? Father Brown replies that he imagines what might drive him to commit a given murder, then reasons who would have the same motive … which doesn’t to fit the series at all, at least not to me. The stories themselves are fair but not great, other than “The Chief Mourner of Marne,” which I really like. Also Chesterton’s insights feel off, like asserting suburban residents have no interest in gossiping about their neighbors.


I’ve had ENIGMA, an eight-issue Vertigo series by Peter Milligan and Duncan Fegredo, on my “to read” list for a while. Discovering it available through my library’s Hoopla service, I checked it out … and didn’t finish it. Protagonist Michael Smith is shocked, utterly shocked when the Enigma and the Brain pop out of one of his beloved childhood comics — what can it possibly mean? After three issues of pretension (did you know killing a fly proves there is no god?) I gave up, flipped to the end, found I hadn’t missed anything.

Cover by Fegredo, all rights remain with current holders.

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A girl and her dog, a man and his conspiracy: movies viewed

CHELSEA (2014) is an indie film in which a twentysomething must variously cope with her best friend moving out and getting married, a succession of unsuitable substitute roommates, a reunion with a former buddy, lots of bad dates and an increasingly unsatisfying job, with her dog the only point of constancy. While the back of the DVD copy makes it sound like she’s approaching a turning point in all this, I don’t see it.

Instead it’s a slice-of-life film, a brief period with the protagonist in which we watch her live her life, then we say goodbye with her still living it. No conclusions, no lessons learned, just life. Which can be a tough sell but in this case it worked — though I did spend most of the movie convinced her dog would die or run away which would either be the big turning point or mark her hitting rock bottom (I was wrong). “I want to pull the love down from the universe and shoot it into both your bodies.”

ALTERNATIVE 3 (1977) was a British mockumentary presented as an episode of a non-existent science news show, with David Ambrose — former TV pundit, soon member of Parliament — as the host. It mock-reveals that a string of mysterious disappearance in the scientific community are the tip of a glacier. The unseen 90 percent:s a joint US/Soviet plan to colonize Mars before climate change creates a Malthusian crisis. That acknowledges that the other two alternatives ain’t going to happen, to wit reducing our carbon footprint or finding the determination to go Thanos and mass-murder much of the human race.

This was nicely done, and would double bill well with the conspiracy-minded mockumentary Tribulation 99. Unfortunately it generated fallout that as Ambrose later said, nobody would have anticipated at the time: a novelization of the episode, published in the US, became fodder for real conspiracy theories such as those in the book Behold a Pale Horse (details here). It’s kept spreading from there. That’s no fault of Ambrose’s. You can find this online but be wary of a same-name mockumentary from years later; as it lists itself on Amazon as a 1977 film, I’m guessing it’s a deliberate attempt to rip off people looking for the original (it got $3 out of me). . “At the very highest levels of East-West diplomacy, there is a factor operating of which we know nothing.”

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A bumpy flight but it feels like I landed the plane

The end of September was not as productive as I’d hoped.

Monday through Wednesday I was busy working on my two Local Reporter articles, one on September’s big town council meeting, one a listicle of Carrboro nonprofits. It shouldn’t have taken three days but I was still tired from last week. Plus Trixie’s incontinence continued into this week, off and on. Plus I took her to a vet appointment Tuesday, then my flu and covid shots Wednesday became the excuse for a larger series of errands: library, cat food, dog drugs. Plus some paperwork that needed doing only the relevant website refused to cooperate. I have no idea if it’s malfunctioning or badly designed.

It doesn’t help that Trixie’s decided she wants to get up earlier. If she gets up just as I’m starting my day, it throws me way off. I lose the one to two dog-free hours I normally enjoy in the morning and coping with her as well as the cats makes it surprisingly hard to focus. But I’ll never say no to her.

Could you? And it’s not like it’s her fault or anything, even when snuggled next to me, she peed on my pants in her sleep.

Thursday, though, I got back in the swing of things. A lot of little tasks related to Become the Sky. Some groundwork for my next Local Reporter articles. And I began replotting Let No Man Put Asunder by thinking about the character arcs. While there’s a lot I like about the second draft, Paul and Mandy need much more emotional stress. And the whole novel needs a stronger arc: the threat level really doesn’t grow enough. It’s run-from-the-bad-guys, find temporary safety, run some more … it doesn’t ratchet up until maybe the last fifth of the book. But that’s fixable.

That’s not a lot to get done but just the fact I was really focused felt good. Especially with Trixie’s problems distracting me.

Oh, my friend and fellow Durham Writers Group member Lucy Adams has a chestnut tree and it recently shed a bunch of nuts. She gave me some and I tried roasting a few; when that proved successful I roasted more of them.

If I put a small X in the shell, the steam from roasting open up the shell, making it easy to peel. I made them into mushrooom-chestnut soup last weekend, and very tasty it was.

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Asphalt!

Durham recently did some road repair. They left the old asphalt in a pile on our corner until the end of the day.

I found it an interesting sight, obviously. So did the Plush One.

Plushie being Plushie, I think he would happily have licked the edges to see what they taste like. I did not give him the opportunity.

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Linking to misogny

Secretary of Defense Pete Hegseth: “I don’t want my son serving alongside troops who are out of shape or in combat [units] with females who can’t meet the same combat arms physical standards as men.” The War Horse at the same link: “Women serving in combat specialties have always been required to meet the same job-specific standards as men, based on the physical demands of their chosen field, such as infantry or artillery. But the broader physical fitness tests taken by all service members once or twice a year serve a different purpose: measuring overall fitness. Those tests have historically been scored using age- and sex-based standards.” Astonishingly (he said sarcastically) “Whiskey Pete” is fine with keeping the adjusted standards for older men.

In case you’re wondering, 90 percent of women in the Marines can meet the new standards. Of course, Hegseth is starting from a loathing for women in what he sees as male roles, so we’ll see what happens next. Remember, his spiritual mentor, misogynist Doug Wilson, is very big on male supremacy.

“The U.S. already has abortion travel bans—we just don’t normally call them that.”

“A judge criticized the Department of Health and Human Services for citing nonexistent scientific evidence or potentially AI-generated citations to support sweeping changes to federal teen pregnancy prevention programs. The Trump administration had said money Congress appropriated for such programs should avoid encouraging teen sexual activity and be used only for programs that promote abstinence and “body literacy.” The administration’s changes were challenged after HHS cut tens of millions in grants.” No surprise. It’s a proven fact that comprehensive sex ed and affordable birth control can reduce the unwanted pregnancy rate, ditto the abortion rate — but Republicans would sooner have more abortions than approve of women enjoying sex.

“A death related to ectopic pregnancy should really be a never event,” said Dr. Alice Abernathy, an OB-GYN in Philadelphia. At the link, ProPublica reports that since abortion bans became legal, ectopic deaths have soared.

Danny Katch looks at “the deep misogyny of an anti-trans movement that poses as defenders of women when it’s convenient but ultimately is driven by a desire to police all violations of traditional gender norms.”

The Girl Scouts support members in their faiths, including Muslims. Needless to say, bigots hate that.

Republican Florida governor candidate Byron Reynolds assures women repairing Florida’s roads is so they can get to the hair salon and stay pretty.

“Although many families strive to share these responsibilities, research has consistently found that mothers tend to shoulder a larger share of the work tied to their kids’ schooling. That includes not only attending school events or packing lunches, but also the less visible work of scheduling doctor appointments, signing up for after-school activities, and responding to emails or calls from teachers and administrators.” One of the reasons is that no matter what instructions they get, schools tend to call the mother first.

“White men get to fail,” said Amanda Litman, co-founder of Run for Something, which recruits young, progressive candidates to run for office. “Women do not get to make mistakes. People of color do not get to make mistakes.” Litman said the argument was not that serious allegations should be treated differently because of a candidate’s identity, but that Platner had been granted an unusual degree of latitude to recover from earlier controversies that a female candidate or a candidate of color would probably not have been afforded.

“It is a very strange thing to move through the world understanding that the one half of the population that never had their humanity doubted on the basis of their genitalia, that enjoys the privilege of being the default category of human, remains the primary arbiter of your physical safety and, sometimes, your personhood.” — from Jill Filipovic’s essay on the Cornell Seven.

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Piano and auditorium

Recently TYG took me to see the Salix Piano Trio at Duke’s Baldwin Auditorium. As I’m rushed for time, today’s post is some photos I took of Baldwin. The performance was excellent too, particularly the Mozart.

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Science links that aren’t about LLMs

Because there’s cool science stuff out there too. To start with, Popular Science tackled a question I’m sure we’ve all wondered about: what kind of animal is the Muppet Gonzo the Great?

Meet the tilcayo, the first new cat species identified in a century.

Scientists are trying to recreate the sounds of Jurassic era insect life.

How about practical science: how often should you replace your kitchen sponge?

A completely 100 percent serious documentary will answer the big science question: “Amid claims that the Sun sustains life on Earth, despite the fact that it vanishes with staggering regularity, the series asks: Where does the Sun really go every night? How is it apparently massive but looks smaller than your hand? And is there any truth in one of humanity’s greatest fears: that it keeps getting eaten by a dragon?” Yes, it’s a parody.

Space X’s satellite network may be leaking radio signals so badly they’re interfering with radio telescopes. And satellites in general are proving an easy way to hack into private data.

“Thankfully, radium-coated cookware never gained great popularity. Promising to be impervious to acid and grease, to never burn or stick, X-Radium Cooking Utensils (below) were advertised at a moment when the element was finding its way into all sorts of consumer products, whether as an additive or just as a futuristic name.” — from an article about the science of cookware.

Cheryl Rofer on why Havana Syndrome is not the result of a Russian super-weapon.

Kamandi cover by Jack Kirby. All rights to images remain with current holders.

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“Jesus is not front and center with these guys”

That’s the conclusion of Bob Smietana looking at Joel Webbon, Dale Partridge and other “Jim Crow theobros” who preach various forms of white male supremacy: pro-slavery, pro-Jim Crow, pro-all-white America (a couple of them debated whether Clarence Thomas deserved to stay). And insisting very firmly that there’s is absolutely 100 percent the only Biblical position on these matters (Mark Noll would like a word). As with Christian misogyny (most of them believe in that too) they’ve taken what they think is the rightful order of society — them on top — and convinced themselves that’s obviously what the Bible says.

Plus using their various platforms to pitch supplements, T-shirts and other lucrative sidelines (or the racism and misogyny are sidelines to milking the rubes) because right-wing rage invariably has grifting attached (side-note: here’s a scam that doesn’t preach hate but does use the gospel as a scamming tool). As Fred Clark says, it’s excellent reporting, not attempting to sanewash or decency-wash these people. As to their motives, it doesn’t matter if they’re merchandizing bigotry to sell their swag or sincere bigots with a side-hustle. Neither one is excusable. Neither one is redeemable — the people may be if they ever see the light, their beliefs never will be. Their twisted faith is a poisonous tree and it will bear no good fruit.

The fruit they bear is the demands we stop caring for people because compassion is a weakness. It makes people object to supposedly righteous things like ICE murders and deporting non-white people to nations they have no connection with. They advocate as cramped and limited a view of love your neighbors as possible. JD Vance says, for instance, “love your family and then you love your neighbor and then you love your community and then you love your fellow citizens and your own country, and then after that you can focus and prioritize the rest of the world.” Worrying about immigrants and refugees when your own people are in trouble? That’s just wrong and un-Biblical!

Not that Vance is in danger of having compassion for people in this country — he is, after all, part of the Toddler’s fascist assault on human decency and American values. And a claim Jesus had a narrow view of who our neighbors are is just wrong. If nothing else, the Bible’s story of Pentecost makes clear all Christians — all races, genders, nationalities — are brothers and sisters in faith. The Toddler administration won’t even admit non-white Christian refugees any more. Only Afrikaaners, whose white supremacy has won Republican support for decades now. Obviously my view of the Bible is no more authoritative than theirs — but faced with two dueling interpretations of the Bible, I think it makes sense, as decent human beings, to choose the more compassionate one. Right-winger Megan Basham insists by telling us the story of the Good Samaritan Jesus was saying don’t help people. Bollocks: if you find someone assaulted by criminals, beaten by the side of the road, decent people don’t need to consult the Bible to know we should help them. Basham, however, has chosen not to be a decent person.

No question, this kind of bigotry has long been part of American (and other forms) Christianity. It’s still a bad thing when people say the quiet parts out loud. They embolden others. They make it seem normal — not in the sense of “there’s a lot of people like that” but “as there’s a lot of people like that we might as well accept this as a reasonable point of view.” No, we shouldn’t.

As the blogger Hilzoy once said, embracing these beliefs is addicting. Feeling rage and hate at some designated group is stimulating and often addictive to the point “you come to rely on it more and more, the fun fades, and it corrodes you from within. The more you nurse your hatred, the larger a part of your identity it becomes. But hatred is a poor substitute for a genuine self, and the more you come to depend on it, the hollower you become, and the harder it is to let it go. It eats away at your values: morality, which we ought to use to make ourselves better people and only secondarily to judge others, turns into a tool we use to excoriate those we hate, and to demonstrate, to ourselves and to others, how very, very different we are from them. Crusades are fought by the righteous, and if you need to believe that you are on a righteous crusade, you will of course need to conscript morality to the cause of maintaining your belief that you are on the side of the angels.

“At this point, as Lewis said, your view of your opponents is driven by your hatred, rather than the other way around. You need “to see grey as black, and then to see white itself as black”, and your needs drive your beliefs. Your intellectual integrity is sacrificed to your psychological needs, your hatred loses any honesty it might once have had, and you surrender to fantasy. This can be hard to undo: once you give up your hold on reality, it’s hard to find your way back. And if you can’t, then you are surrounded by malevolent enemies of your own creation, enemies that can do you real damage even though they are purely imaginary. You are “fixed for ever in a universe of pure hatred” which you created in your own image, and which has trapped you.

“This is dangerous. I have watched people get into real moral trouble this way. I have no wish to join them. And the only way I know to prevent it is to be absolutely scrupulous about thinking ill of people. If the facts warrant my dislike, so be it. But the moment I find myself wanting to see grey as black, then I know that I’m going wrong. And as C.S. Lewis said, whenever this impulse “bobs its head up, day after day, year after year, all our lives long, we must hit it on the head.” As I said, not just because it’s unjust to think ill of others when they don’t deserve it, or because it’s ignoble, but because it’s poison.”

I think that applies even if the theobros (and others of their ilk) are faking for the clicks and swag sales. Sell your wares and your podcast by angry outrageous takes on race or gender and you have a financial incentive to stay extreme or get worse. For example podcaster Candace Owens trying to grab attention by declaring she doesn’t believe in a round earth or a flat earth. And that’s assuming the hatemongers have the sense not to start drinking their own snake oil. The mask that people wear can easily become the face and, as Philip Agre put it, “few of us have the skill to hate with a clear mind.”

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Intelligence, New York and rebellion: three books

I’m not sure when I first read Stephen Jay Gould’s THE MISMEASURE OF MAN — the 1980s, maybe? — but it certainly hasn’t aged at all.

Gould looks back at the long history of efforts to measure human intelligence and to rank it, not merely between individuals but between groups — man vs. woman, black vs. white vs. Native American vs. Aborigine, native-born American vs. immigrant, upper class vs. lower. Why yes, there was a lot of racism involved; even people who were enlightened and liberal routinely accepted that the white Anglo-Saxon male was the summit of human evolution and obviously more intelligent than anyone else. Knowing this unsurprisingly biased the results. The great anatomist Paul Broca, for instance, admitted that women’s brains were smaller than men’s in proportion to their bodies but obviously, as we know women are stupid, their small brains must be the root cause.

Gould argues the fatal mistake in all the theorists he’s covering was the belief that intelligence was a single, fixed, quantifiable thing (a concept that eventually became “IQ”) and that it was an identifiable physical property of the brain, untainted by education, culture, environment, etc. And that attempts to measure it were always undone by bias; when it became obvious that IQ tests of immigrants reflected how long they’d been in America (and therefore exposed to American culture) the response was that obviously the immigrants who arrived earlier were the smarter, more ambitious types and the later arrivals were the degenerate dregs. This is wonkier than his previous books, getting much more into the technical weeds than they did, but it certainly makes its point well.

WILL EISNER’S NEW YORK is an anthology of multiple smaller works by the creator of the Spirit, all focusing on life in the Big Apple. One section tells stories built around windows, fire hydrants and other features of city life. Another looks at four ghosts haunting the site of the building where they died, even though it’s been demolished and replaced. “Invisible People” looks at the ways people can vanish in the teeming crowds; one, concerning a recluse who can’t convince anyone his obituary was wrong (they’ve never seen him, how do they know who he is?), shows similars fears of loss-of-identity to The Net.

It’s great stuff but not Eisner’s best stuff. Like his Life in Pictures, the tone is too bleak and miserable, plus the women are overwhelmingly unlikable and unsympathetic. It’s surprising, given the women of Eisner’s Spirit series are far more interesting and appealing.

Although the publisher lists Henry Kuttner as sole author of FURY, CL Moore says in the introduction that she collaborated on it (they did lots of work on each other’s stories throughout their marriage); Kuttner’s mark is on the Don’t Trust Authority scenes, hers on the Don’t Trust Love moments. Their story dissatisfied me as a teen, probably because it’s about an anti-hero against a decaying society and I wasn’t really ready for that. And Sam, “who was born into a world he had to smash before it smashed him,” isn’t a typical anti-hero.

Following the nuclear destruction of Earth, the survivors escaped to Venus and settled in domed colony cities under the Venusian oceans. A minority of people, affected by radiation, become immortal, and eventually rule the cities. They can be killed but they have advantages: decades of added experience and knowledge and the ability to make long-range plans. They’re also cautious: the confined, unchanging environment of the cities is destroying humanity’s spirit but the Immortals are unwilling to gamble on the long, dangerous challenge of colonizing the hostile Venusian surface land.

Sam was born an immortal but his mother died giving birth to him. His bitter father had Sam brought up among the lower classes. Sam becomes a tough, dangerous criminal, then slowly gains ambition, leading to throwing his weight behind the land-colonization efforts. The Immortals don’t know what to make of him but hope they can either use him or destroy him. And why does it sometimes seem there’s a guiding hand manipulating everything? There’s a lot of interesting ideas in this novel, and Sam makes a memorable protagonist, a guy who’s doing a good job but lacks many of the ennobling qualities anti-heroes often have.

Fury cover uncredited, top cover by Eisner. All rights to images remain with current holders.

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