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Toads and gadgets: Lester Dent’s The Gadget Man

As a fan of Lester Dent’s pulp writing, it was inevitable I’d follow reading his early 1930s detectives (Lynn Lash, Lee Nace and Foster Fade) with reading his most successful, Clickell Rush, the Gadget Man. I’ve been curious about “Click” since long before I needed to do background reading for Savage Adventures.As detailed in the first story, Click’s an inventor who saw potential to both do good and get rich by selling his tech to cops. Anesthetic grenades like Doc Savage’s. Concealed hypodermics for taking down someone in a fight. Small explosives, tear gas bombs, gas hidden in cigarettes, explosives in matches — you get the idea. Click’s strength seems to be chemistry though he has other kinds of gadgetry too.

The cops weren’t interested, dismissing Click as a kook. He’s looking at being dead broke until he finds a papier-mache toad in his apartment with a radio inside it — not wireless, but one that connects to its sibling radio via the electrical power grid (Click has to connect it up to make it work). The mysterious Bufa has not only left the toad but one half of a $10,000 bill (yes, we used to have those); Click will get the other half when he cracks a crime Bufa wants investigated. Bufa, you see, is a toad that preys on slugs and insects of the human species.

After Chick cracks the case, Bufa has more gigs for him, always with the $10,000 bait. Of course, ten grand was a lot of money back then; after a couple of cases Click figures he can afford a vacation. But no matter where he travels, the toad keeps turning up and Bufa keeps getting him into trouble; if Click won’t take a case for cash, there are other levers.

These are a fun set of screwy mysteries variously involving a man slicing off people’s noses, a mysterious shipment of frogs, a madhouse in a center of a swamp and more. However they’re lower-key, lower stakes and more realistic than the earlier adventures, let alone Doc Savage. For that reason I might enjoy them more if they weren’t by Dent as my expectations would be different. I suspect I’d still prefer the earlier series though.

One really odd thing is that the female guest-stars in each story are generic, just pretty girls who (sometimes) know how to shoot a gun. That’s a surprise given that Dent was good about using strong, competent women in the early series or in most of his Doc Savage stories (these three, for instance). Again, that’s disappointment over not living up to my expectations … but I can’t help having expectations.

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Let No Man Put Asunder and the “menace” plot

In the introduction to Lester Dent’s Weird Adventures of the Blond Adder, Dent expert Will Murray mentions that the 1933 stories fell into a sub-genre pulp magazine editors were calling the “menace” story. Murray quotes literary agent Lurton Blassingame, who cites Phantom of the Opera, Hound of the Baskervilles and the Fu Manchu novels.“In this type of story,” Blessingame said, “some person or thing hangs a veil of horror over the characters in this story; we never know when this menace will strike but we do know it will continue to commit depredations until the hero does his stuff and overcomes it in the final climax.” An editor Murray quotes says the figure can be a mystery until the climax or, as in Dracula or Fu Manchu, the heroes know who he is but still can’t stop him from striking.

For example in the first Blond Adder story Nace goes out into the woods to meet someone. A man comes running up to him, bound and gagged, and suddenly explodes. Several more people explode later in the story, but who’s behind it? What does he want? How does he do it?

Dent applied this approach in a number of Doc Savage yarns. in The Flaming Falcons the eponymous bone-grey birds appear and people drop dead, then the birds explode in a ball of fire. Not all mysterious-death stories in the series qualify: the disintegrator in Land of Terror is a formidable weapon but it’s treated as just that, a super-weapon, where the matter-destroying Red Snow feels more terrifying and mysterious. I think the latter novel qualifies.

The “menace” motif didn’t disappear with the pulps. It has a lot in common with slasher films; Freddie Kruger and Michael Myers both seem to qualify as the menace that “will continue to commit depredations” until defeated. Scooby-Doo would seem to qualify: lurking figures like the Phantom Shadow or the Ghost Clown threatening everyone until the masks are pulled off. Classic Joker stories such as his first appearance in Batman #1, “The Laughing Fish” or “The Joker’s Five-Way Revenge” fit the menace sub-genre: the Joker’s out there and he’s going to kill with a smile until Batman finally stops him.Clearly it’s a trope that still works. Which brings me to its presence in my own work. Questionable Minds, for instance is very much in the menace mode. Jack the Ripper, enhanced by psychic powers is out there killing; nobody knows where he’ll strike, nobody knows why, and nobody seems able to stop him.  Southern Discomfort, out later this year, has menace elements too. Readers know the villain is Gwalchmai, out for revenge on Olwen McAlister but we don’t know why. Maria, Olwen and the other characters have no idea. All they know is that they’re under attack: a flock of aggressive ravens, a kelpie, a barghuest, hanging a black teenager in his bedroom, putting a hospital into magical sleep so he can confront Maria.

Then there’s my work in progress, Let No Man Put Asunder. In the first chapter, Mandy Buchanan and Paul Templar find themselves mentally linked, and the target of the mysterious Community of All. From that point on they’re on the run from magicians, martial artists, vampires and elves out to capture them for the Community. Their enemies are ruthless, relentless and powerful; when Mandy tries driving them out of town it turns out space has been warped so they can’t leave.

Just having menace isn’t enough by itself though. At some point the heroes have to fight back; at some point they have to get answers, even if the answers raise more questions. Dent gave a hypothetical example where the protagonist learns the bad guys are kidnapping someone named Elmer. They rescue Elmer, but he’s a ring-tailed monkey; why would they steal a monkey? And why are the rings on the tail painted on? Saving Elmer’s a win but the hero doesn’t even know why it matters.

About a third of the way through this draft, I realized I didn’t have enough menace: once the cops came on board it was too talky. This is a problem I’ve seen in some published books, that once the authorities realize you’re right and start helping, things get too easy. I went back and rewrote to keep Paul and Mandy (not a couple by the way, she’s more the big sister he desperately needs) on their own and in peril for much longer. But at a certain point just flinging peril at them wasn’t enough; as Dent says, action has to do more than move your protagonist over the scenery. They begin to push back, have some wins, but then the Community of All ups the game and things end up worse.

At that point though, my ability to write it seemed to fade. I think part of the problem was that I was still moving them over the scenery; the individual battles were fine but they were interchangeable. The plot wasn’t moving enough. Hence my decision to move to the end. It’s an imperfect end but it reveals the stakes and the nature of the Community of All. That”s much better than having vague ideas in my head, even if I change what’s on the page completely (as Sherlock Holmes says, “any truth is better than indefinite doubt”).

I’m sure that when I finish the second draft, it’ll still be a menace story. But the menace will have a much stronger arc.

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This One Simple Trick did not boost my productivity

Last weekend we had our writers’ group Christmas party. TYG and I have hosted it for a decade, pandemic years exempted. Last year was smaller than the usual; this year we must have had around 30 people. Apparently Dec. 9 fell into everyone’s sweet spot for not conflicting with other events.

(Early morning photograph)

It was great fun but prep and cooking left me wiped, particularly after my trip to Florida. Rather than plan out the week in detail on Sunday, I just jotted down what I wanted to write on each day: Monday, stories for The Local Reporter; Tuesday, Let No Man Put Asunder and so on.

Turns out this doesn’t work for me. All the little tasks and chores I try to get done during the week went undone; I kept losing track of breathing exercises, voice exercises, dog exercises and — well, you get the idea. That I slept poorly (I’m not sure why) didn’t help.

There was also much dog drama. Last week Plushie began licking frantically at his left foot so TYG took him in while I was in Florida and got him an allergy shot. He wasn’t very happy afterwards.This past Monday, it got worse: he was limping and snapped at TYG when she tried for a closer look at his foot. Fortunately we were going in for his physical rehab check up so we asked the doctor to check out the foot as well. It took her and a vet tech but she managed to find a tiny seed buried in the fur between his pads. A couple of days later, Plushie was back to his old cheery self. Yay!

Still I got a fair amount done. First, an article for The Local Reporter and advance work on several articles to come. I learned when I was a full-time journalist that it goes much easier if you keep well ahead of deadline. I also got another 20,000 words done on Southern Discomfort edits. Plus I made it to the doctor this morning for a recheck. Blood pressure and weight are up, something to work on in the New Year. I know part of the reason for the weight gain is the party — lots of good food — but also that after Wisp damaged her leg at the end of June, I spent the next month barely sleeping (she liked beating her cast on the bed to see if it would come loose) and didn’t exercise at all. Which is to say, the condition should be fixable. Hope so.

While I don’t have my newspaper story to link to yet, you can check me out on Con-Tinual panels about comic-book BFFs and Captain America. I also wrote my father’s obit with input and editing from my siblings — truly a joint project. I also posted at Atomic Junk Shop, first another post about Marvel in 1967, and one discussing how the art was great even when the story was off. Below is an example, Jack Kirby showing that even as he became less enthused about his Marvel work, it was still dynamic action. If you’re puzzled, that’s Steve Rogers carrying a Captain America imposter.

On my own blog I hit 284 views on Tuesday which I think is a record; WordPress’ stats page seems to have changed since I last visited so I can’t confirm that I’m right. It’s still cool; if any of y’all are sticking around, welcome! Puzzling though as I don’t know why I’d get such a massive bump. Posting about Taylor Swift? Spider photographs? Just random chance? I’ll enjoy it while it lasts.

And earlier today I drew up my schedule for next week. This time I went into detail. For me, it seems that works best.

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The other Doc Savage — or is it the other Lester Dent?

Working on my Doc Savage history, Savage Adventures, gave me an incentive to do something I’ve been itching to do for a while, read some of Lester Dent‘s other pulp crimefighters. Before leaving for Florida I bought the ebooks of HELL IN BOXES and THE WEIRD ADVENTURES OF THE BLOND ADDER, covering three gadget-wielding heroes Dent introduced in 1932, 1933 and 1934 (the later and much more successful Gadget Man will have to wait). They were fun to read and yes, definitely relevant to writing about Doc Savage. Let’s look at them chronologically.

Lynn Lash was the first and least interesting of the three men, though the stories are still entertaining. He’s one of those millionaires who dabble in crimefighting just because, a common thing in the Golden Age of Mystery. In the introduction, Doc Savage expert Will Murray says Dent probably modeled him on Craig Kennedy, Scientific Detective, a fictional criminologist who debuted in 1910. Kennedy’s adventures were hugely popular for a while but according to Thrilling Detective suffered from poor writing and that the cutting edge forensic science Kennedy wielded got old-fashioned fast.

Not a problem for Dent, who didn’t let scientific realities restrain him. Working out of his skyscraper lab (much like Doc), Lash deals with “The Sinister Ray” that induces blindness in victims; can Lash stop an unnamed Asian nation (presumably Japan) from using it to conquer America? In “The Mummy Murders,” the murder method withers its victims in minutes; in the unpublished (until this collection) “The Flame Horror” the villains deploy a superpowerful form of thermite that burns anything it touches.

Murray details how Lash appeared as pulps were rejecting Agatha Christie-style stories of detection in favor of “menace” yarns where heroes battled sinister villains whose constant threat overshadowed every page. I can see that in all the stories I’m discussing here, as well as a lot of Doc Savage (I’ll be blogging about that aspect in more detail later). Other elements the three heroes have in common are that they’re all extremely tall and there’s much more slang than in the typical Doc Savage yarn.

Despite the excitement and his gadgetry (such as a briefcase that contains a miniature gun), Lash is less interesting as a character than Ricky, his tomboyish secretary who speaks seven languages. 1933’s Lee Nace, AKA the Blond Adder, is much more entertaining and much more evocative of the Man of Bronze.Like Doc, Nace is a polymath, having completed both law school and medical school and written a chemistry textbook. He doesn’t carry a gun (like Doc he thinks it makes you dependent on the weapon) but does have an arsenal of gadgets including a bulletproof vest of his own design, a metal skullcap that looks like his own hair, and cufflinks holding tiny darts dipped in knockout drops. He also has the quirky details Doc’s men and many of the supporting cast do: a snakelike scar on his forehead (hence his name) and a habit of biting through the bakelite stem of his pipe under stress. He’s much more human than Doc, though. A shot to his bulletproof vest will knock him down and hurt like hell. There’s no antidote for his knockout darts so in one story he’s stuck waiting the full two hours until the men revive. In one story he gets into a brawl over a baseball game.

Nace’s menace stories involve a green skeleton apparently killing people, men turning up dead with their eyes popping out (a hook Dent would later reuse in The Annihilist) and in the final story an apparent meteorite containing a human skull and a diamond. My first thought was that it was a variation of the superheated gas the villains want control of in The Red Skull but after reading the unpublished Lash story “The Flame Horror” it feels more like Dent recycled that heat weapon. I suspect after Nace’s adventures ended (according to Murray, Dent simply couldn’t keep up with them on top of his Doc Savage duties) Dent also recycled the Blond Adder’s female cousin — a capable woman, she becomes Nace’s sidekick/apprentice — into Doc’s cousin Pat Savage. This makes me wonder again if Dent wanted Pat to join Doc’s team but the editors overruled him.

The Blond Adder’s stories are probably the strongest but Foster Fade, the Crime Spectacularist is the most interesting character. The publisher of the Planet, the world’s most sensationalistic and successful tabloid, has decided that since readers crave spectacular crime stories, he’ll hire an in-house investigator to solve bizarre, colorful murders (an Aroma Killer who murders with scents, a mysterious Something that turns people to brittle stone) in colorful style, with lots of Doc-style gadgetry. Platinum blonde reporter Dinametra Stevens then writes up the case; her style is too lurid for tasteful women’s-interest pieces but it’s perfect for this kind of blood and thunder. While “Din” is no fan of seeing dead bodies, she shows herself capable in a fight too.

I love that concept (I may steal it at some point) and how Dent develops it. Unlike Nace, Fade would love to pack a gun but the readers think it’s cooler if he doesn’t, so that’s out. And where Lash and Nace are admired by cops, the Planet has written way too many pieces comparing Fade to the bumbling cops; they can’t stand the Spectacularist.

Alas, we only got three Fade stories, possibly because of overwork again, or that the editor was tough to work for. If you’re a Doc Savage fan, both books are worth reading.

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The dogs ate my homework! The joyscrolling didn’t help.

Joyscrolling being the best term I could think of for the opposite of doomscrolling. After the election turned out so well for us I spent a lot of Wednesday checking for more good news and arguing with forced-birthers on Twitter ranting about how this proved nothing, they would never quit, Republicans had better not even think about giving up the fight! It felt good, (even given Republicans in Ohio are now vowing they’ll just ignore Amendment One).

This did not, of course, get much writing accomplished. In addition to which, TYG left Monday for a business conference and with only one parent on hand, all the animals were with me 24/7. That got me feeling very off-balance by Wednesday. And on Thursday, until she came back that afternoon. Today I was still pretty fried. There’s something about the constant lack of personal space that I find very wearying. Plus Wisp got frustrated because she never got her usual morning snuggle time before the dogs get up. Conversely Plushie was most displeased when he wanted my lap and found Mr. Wisp had the com.I did get a lot of work done for The Local Reporter but no finished articles. I’m still waiting on responses to emails so I can finish up.

I got another chapter of Savage Adventures edited, covering Doc Savage Magazine through The Devil’s Black Rock at the end of 1942. I was dismayed, though, to discover I’d gotten the name of a major character in Birds of Death wrong — it’s Benjamin Boot, not “Boots” Baxter (I’ve fixed it in the relevant post). If I can slip up like that’ll have to double check everything when I do the final proof.Plus I reread the book Windmaster’s Bane which I’ll be discussing next week.

Elsewhere online, I blogged some about The Thing in the Silver Age and about Jim Steranko’s amazing Agent of SHIELD artwork. Below, Nick Fury’s 1967 pad.And on Con-Tinual’s YouTube channel, I’m part of a panel discussing favorite superhero teams.

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We ducked an icy bullet!

Wednesday, I noticed that while the thermostat was set to 72, the temperature on the house, as shown on the thermostat, was 67. Given the temperature outside was going into the high 20s that night, this seemed like a bad thing.

Air Innovations, our HVAC contractor, came out and confirmed that yep, it was a bad thing: the motor had broken down. As it’s an older unit — we were planning t0 replace it early next year — we anticipated going a week or more while they scrounged up a motor. To our relief, they found one locally and installed it before bedtime that evening. It was pricey, but given it would have taken almost two weeks to get it replaced, better than spending two weeks bundled up and freezing. And fortunately we could afford it.

Other than that, this was a good week. I wrote an article about Chapel Hill city hall’s urban designer, though it took longer than usual. I’d hoped to get ahead on my article for next week, but no.

I got 3,000 words done on Let No Man Put Asunder; it would have been more but I had the HVAC dude and a locksmith to deal with (the outside closet containing our fusebox had a jammed lock). A lot of it feels like stuff I may cut later; I’m frozen on advancing the plot so it’s mostly character bits and chasing around. As Doc Savage creator Lester Dent once put it, action should do more than just move people across the scenery and I’m not sure the last couple of chapters manage that. Then again, maybe it’s the kind of pause-and-reflect moments my writing group keeps saying they want. We’ll see.

I read over another 20,000 words of Southern Discomfort and made some edits. Not a lot, which makes me wary; was my finished draft really that good or am I being an easy grader? Still I am making changes even if they’re not major ones, so perhaps major revisions are not needed at this point. We’ll see — I still have a final round of editing next year.

I went over my Savage Adventures manuscript from 1941-1944 and that looks pretty good, though there are several points where I’ll have to go back and reread the books to see if my comments are correct.

I didn’t get anything done on Oh the Places You’ll Go but I guess I can’t win ’em all. Still a good week. Oh, and I have two posts at Atomic Junk Shop. One was about stories in otherwise good series that don’t do more than fill space. For example Tales of Suspense #92, in which the story has Iron Man in pointless battles with the Vietcong before this memorable finish:And the other about the debut of the Daily Bugle’s city editor, Robbie Robertson, a groundbreaking black character for the Silver Age.#SFWApro. Art by Carmine Infantino, Gene Colan and John Romita, top to bottom. All rights to images remain with current holders.

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Week in review: not the cat-astrophe I feared

Yesterday Wisp got out.

Snowdrop was at the backdoor for his food. TYG opened the door for him to come in, then went to make up his breakfast. I opened the door wide to see if he’d come further in (he’s very skittish of late). There didn’t seem any risk as Wisp was in another room. Suddenly, though, she came running in, nuzzled him — and then rushed out before I could stop her.

That settles the question of whether she’s completely happy as an indoor cat. I knew she missed Snowdrop — she’d peer through the blinds at him —— but she hadn’t made much effort to resist when the door was open and I even lightly restrained her. But there she was, on the deck, refusing to come in, even when we offered food. She showed up again later, same result, then vanished most of the day. This left me pretty miserable: sure, she made it five years between when we first saw her and when we finally brought her in this summer, but it’s still a risky life to be an outdoor cat. Plus she’s still limping from her leg injury; what if she thought she still had her old speed and ended up in a coyote or hit by a car?

Thank goodness, she came in Thursday evening to eat, then we shut the door. The taste of freedom changed her, I’m afraid: she keeps going to the back door and meowing to get out. Hopefully that will pass. The whole thing shows that while caring for her is often inconvenient, it’s the right choice.

Fortunately I got some work done despite that and despite some weird chaos from coordinating a lunch date with a friend. I finished another story for The Local Reporter about a library exhibit on immigrant cooking. I reworked Oh the Places You’ll Go and I’m finally making progress on fixing it. The ending doesn’t completely work yet but I’ve eliminated most of the elements that made it feel like a sequel was necessary. I completed this months work on a rewrite of Savage Adventures. I also carved out enough time without pets to complete my full week’s worth of exercise. Go me!

Elsewhere online, I participated in a Con-Tinual panel on comic-book villains. Over at Atomic Junk Shop I posted about the landmark story “Spider-Man No More” and the debut of the Kingpin, then about a curious parody of the Marvel Method of making comics.I didn’t get anything done on Let No Man Put Asunder but overall I’m pleased.

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Books read from various series

BASIL OF BAKER STREET by Eve Titus is the novel that inspired The Great Mouse Detective, with Basil and Dr. Dawson coming to the rescue when the child-napping Terrible Three try to force the mouse residents of 221B Baker Street out into the cold so they can take over the property for crime. Amusing, and I do like that Basil is an intentional Holmes imitator, living in 221 so that he can model himself on the master detective.

COUNT CROWLEY: Amateur Monster Hunter by Dave Dastmalchian and Lukas Ketner is V2 in the series. In the first TPB, protagonist Jeri got a gig as a midnight-movie host only to discover the gig also involves monster-slaying. Here she has to deal with a possibly friendly werewolf, a definitely hostile vampire, going to AA meetings and her predecessor’s stubborn resistance to mentoring a woman. Enjoyable, with more 1980s period references than the first book.

Mae, the Korean American protagonist of THE DARKEST NIGHT: Witch Queen #1 by AD Starrling kicks off her series facing the kind of power Harry Dresden didn’t encounter for a half-dozen books or more, making me wonder if the baseline for urban fantasy has shifted (much like comics where cosmic battles are almost routine). Like The Girl Who Sees it’s very heavy on exposition and for the same rationale — even though Mae is the Witch Queen destined to rule over the magical world, she knows nothing about magic so she needs to have it all explained to her. While I give Starrling credit for squeezing in a lot of action (way more than most such info-dumpy novels do), the exposition killed my interest. I did like the Korean aspects Starrling worked into the book though.

Dave Robinson’s Doc Savage pastiche, DOC VANDAL: Against the Eldest Flame gives the protagonist an origin that’s owes as much to Edmond Hamilton’s futuristic Doc Savage, Captain Future — Vandal was raised on a lunar base by an alien computer — and a colorful dieselpunk setting that includes airships, talking gorillas and Nazi zombies. In this kickoff adventure, Nazi gorillas kidnap Doc and his team, taking them not to Germany but to a lost city of dinosaur people where a living-flame being plans to take over Doc’s body to escape it’s current prison. This starts slow but picks up steam as it goes along, though it’s at best comparable to mid-level Doc Savage novel.

While many of Edgar Rice Burroughs’ tales take place in the same universe (The Moon Maid, the Carson of Venus series, Barsoom, Tarzan and Pellucidar, at a minimum), his only full-on crossover was TARZAN AT THE EARTH’S CORE. In a direct sequel to Tanar of Pellucidar, Burroughs’ friend Jason Gridley heads into Pellucidar via the polar opening in hopes of rescuing David Innes from the Korsars. Knowing Pellucidar is largely jungle, he logically recruits Tarzan to help navigate the landscape; however it turns out that in the perpetual sunlight of the inner Earth, even Tarzan can get lost, as does Jason himself. Can they survive, let alone reach David?

Watching the cast battle cave bears, lizard people and barbarians (not to mention a flying stegosaurus!) is lively fun, though Burroughs only gets back to the nominal mission at the end, and relies as he so often does on coincidence — digging out of a cave prison, Jason literally emerges under Tarzan’s feet, for instance.  Fun, even so, but the black cook’s Stepin Fetchit characterization and dialog is painfully racist (having the Noble Savages of the Waziri along doesn’t help). This walks back the ending of Pellucidar even more than the previous book, establishing Innes’ empire is a mere fraction of Pellucidar’s land surface. The ending, with one of Gridley’s team still missing, leads straight into the next book, Back to the Stone Age.

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Yes, but you should have seen the other guy!

Monday lunch I took the dogs for walkies. They were eager so I picked up the pace and — as far as I can reconstruct things — when I set my foot on a small piece of wood the combination threw me off balance and forward. I remember having time to think clearly about what was happening, which often happens in moments like that, but without any ability to alter my trajectory.

Hence the goose egg.By the grace of god, luck was with me. The lump on the head, a badly bleeding knee, but no damage of any sort beyond that. I’m very much aware it could have been so much worse. Plus my glasses, while bent, were not scratched; my phone flew out of my pocket but landed face up.

The biggest immediate problem was that the dogs were running loose. I staggered after them — I would have called TYG for help but only then did I realize I didn’t have my phone at hand — but they were enjoying the chase. Finally I overcame my fear of them running in front of a car and stopped. Dogs like a game of chase but they hate the thought of their parent walking away from them. While I was too worried to manage that, my stopping brought Plushie back, then Trixie stopped and let me catch up with her. Again, could have been really bad.

Despite that exciting opening to the work week, things went well. I got 6,000 words added to Let No Man Put Asunder as well as some work on Savage Adventures. My rewriting of Southern Discomfort went swimmingly; I was able to hit 20,000 words without difficulty. It’ll get tougher ahead (there are more scenes that need rewriting further on) but that was a good start.

I didn’t get an article in for The Local Reporter though I did have one published last week on Chapel Hill Library’s pushback against censorship. I am working on some new ideas I turned up — one for this week, a couple for after that. It’s always good to have stories in advance of deadline. Over at Atomic Junk Shop I look at the space race in comic-book ads and an issue that deconstructs the Clash of Titans.

Annoyingly I did not get any exercising done. Too sore Monday, tired Tuesday, then the schedule just went nuts with contractors and house cleaners. Still this week could have turned out a lot worse. But it didn’t!

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Story behind the Story: The Savage Year

As this one just came out last fall in Metastellar, some of you may remember the following “how this story came to be” post from back then. But for those who came in late —

Walking past a half-naked couple making out next to a picnic basket, Artemis West wished she could turn invisible. I never thought my first assignment would involve working magic in front of a park full of hippies.

It’s 1968, Robert Kennedy has just been assassinated, and the country is mourning. And as Artemis soon discovers, her job as a Secret Service sorcerer is about to get much more complicated, thanks to a British black magician and a bronze-skinned, golden-eyed drifter, Diana Savage. Whose father is some kind of brilliant scientist and philanthropist, and everyone expects her to follow in his wake. So she’s run away for a summer of love before she heads to college. Only there are innocent people in danger, and in her heart she’s her father’s child …

Why yes, this is the story about Doc Savage’s daughter that I wrote about starting several years ago. As noted at the link, I’d wanted to write about her (or more precisely my version of her) since the early 1980s, but never came up with a story. Then I hit on teaming her up with Art West, great grandson of James West, the hero of Wild Wild West now following family tradition by working for the Secret Service, though as a mage.

When I reread the post at the link, it floored me: my protagonist has been Artemis West and female so long I didn’t remember ever considering a male lead (Jim West’s partner was Artemus Gordon. Descendants are stuck with the name). It’s not surprising though, as I write a lot of male/female teams. As to why I switched to make Artemis a woman … I have no idea.

The story idea beyond that shaped up early. Mages in the Secret Service actually have a dull gig. All they do is go around and touch up the bindings Native American shamans used to lock various

Lovecraftian outsiders away. As long as the mages do their job, the outsiders can’t get out.Except that when Artemis goes to check the local bindings (originally San Francisco, but it eventually shifted to the Midwest) she discovers someone is letting outsiders loose. Which is, of course, bad. Even alongside a bronze teenage tornado who fights like ten men (she’s Doc Savage’s daughter. She’s been well-trained) Artemis has her work cut out for her.

Refining the concept proved a lot tougher. I had no idea what the bad guy wanted, what exactly he’d unleashed and how the creature would help him achieve his goals. Nor did I know how to stop him. Eventually I figured it out, with the help of Lester Dent’s plotting formula — appropriate as he created Doc.

I also trimmed back a lot of the in-jokes, such as a reference to Artemis’ aunt Honey. I wanted to write the story so that someone who’d never heard of Jim West or Doc Savage could enjoy it, which meant avoiding any Easter eggs that would be more distracting than amusing.

When I was done, I presented it to the beta readers in my local science-fiction writing group. They suggested I needed to introduce the villain earlier to give him more of a presence, and that I needed to make the story weirder in a few spots. It was good advice. I followed it.

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