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Story behind the story: And He Bought a Crooked Cat

In the worlds of 19-Infinity, we’re now up to 1954, the setting for And He Bought a Crooked Cat. I conceived the opening scene, or the initial draft of it, back in the late 1980s. After many dead ends and a final rewrite, it found print in the anthology Rejection back in 2015.I’ve no idea what sparked the original idea but I came up with a scene in which a young man follows a grotesquely disfigured cat down a narrow, twisty street. At the end of it, a crooked old man informs the protagonist that having walked a crooked mile, he has to buy the crooked cat. Unfortunately, that was as far as I got with the concept. I tried reworking the lead to give him a character arc — he’d just gotten over a bad breakup, he’d poured out his heart to someone who didn’t even know he was into her — but none of it seemed relevant to the crooked cat appearing. Nor could I figure out what happened next.

IIRC, the idea of nursery rhyme characters as a chaotic, nonsensical power trapped in the rhymes manifested before my final protagonist, Paul took shape. Once that idea came to me, I started playing the chaos opposite an era that looked staid, nonchaotic, sober—the 1950s. Only underneath there was all this chaos and restlessness (civil rights, gay rights, etc.), and now the rhymes were breaking free …

Slowly Paul took shape as the counterweight. A writer/editor, serious, intelligent, and depressingly middle-aged at 25. Staid. Afraid to take a chance. Only now he’s dealing not only with the crooked cat but four and twenty blackbirds who just plucked off his  friend’s nose. The kittens showing up and asking for pie. And then there’s his lost love, Mary, Mary quite contrary …

My initial ending drove home the subtext of the story rather explicitly. I wavered back and forth on that and eventually decided by best friend Cindy was right and cut the explicitness out. The story, which had bounced to multiple venues by this sort, still kept bouncing back. Finally last year I sent it to Rejected and … success! Here in 19-Infinity, it gets another chance to shine. Available on Amazon in paperback and available for ebook pre-order on some channels (more to follow).

Oh, in case you’re wondering, there’s no particular reason I jumped from the 1930s to the 1950s. If I’d known I’d be doing this collection I’d probably have written a story set in the 1940s, but I didn’t, so there you go.

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19-Infinity: The cover reveal!

As I’ve said before, I doubt cover reveals do much to sell books. Great covers, sure, but does announcing the cover in advance really hook anyone or build excitement in anyone who wasn’t already excited? That said, it does seem to be a tradition of modern promotion, so here’s mine, courtesy of my friend Kemp Ward:Here’s the promotional copy, though I’m still tinkering with it: “It’s the 1900s but not as we knew them. Nazi shadow invaders battle Tesla and Edison. Teenage girls face sorcerers who kill through mirrors. A science fiction convention hides a conspiracy by Nazi occultists. Robert F. Kennedy’s death unleashes cosmic horror. Nursery rhymes walk the streets of New York.

Welcome to 19-Infinity, a supernatural version of the 20th century captured in 11 short stories. Whether riding along with a woman reporter in the 1930s or an aging actor in 1999, we get to see the last century as it never was — and given what magic does, that’s probably a good thing.”

The book will go live for sales in August though I’ve ordered advance paperback copies for my appearance at Con-Carolinas. The contents:

1930s

Leave the World to Darkness. A woman reporter stumbles into the story of a lifetime — if she survives to write it.

No Good Deed Goes Unpunished. After two thousand years of accursed immortality, the Wandering Jew is one cynical S.O.B. The death of a good guy at the hands of the “Bad Samaritan” may turn things around.

1950s

And He Bought a Crooked Cat. At twenty-five, Paul is already middle-aged and stuffy. Then he has to walk a crooked mile to save his best friend from a crooked cat.

No One Can Slay Her. Despite the doom laid upon her, wealthy amateur detective Jennifer Armstrong is young, happy and in love with her new wife Kate (in this 1950s, gay marriage is legal and unremarkable). Only someone’s threatening Kate with a deadly magic that ties in with a sleeping god and a low-budget film stuido.

1960s

The Savage Year. In the wake of Robert Kennedy’s death, a bronze-skinned vagabond girl and a woman working as a Secret Service sorcerer have to stop a British mage from unleashing cosmic horrors.

Shadows Reflected in Darkness. Maud picked the wrong night to sneak into a Soho jazz club in “swinging London.” Because now Death’s Jester intends to kill her.

1970s

The Glory That Was. Years ago Elizabeth and Molly adventured in a fantasy realm of Greek mythology. Now they’re back together in our world, but their lives have taken radically different paths.

1980s

Death Is Like a Box of Chocolates. It’s only a box of Stuckey’s praline candy. How can it be causing chaos?

1990s

Where Angels Fear to Lunch. The Wandering Jew now works as a PI. When an angel walks into his office and begs for help, it launches a case that could decide the fate of the world.

A Famine Where Abundance Lies. A cutting edge search engine. An overworked IT professional. A mysterious consultant. It adds up to trouble.

The Schloss and the Switchblade. When Ward Hanover agreed to be guest of honor at Nevercon, he didn’t expect they’d be screening his long-lost first film, The Juvenile Delinquents Meet the Nazi. And it’s dangerously different from the low-budget movie he remembers.

Needless to say I’ll be blogging more about the book this summer.

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Did I miss a golden opportunity?

With my regular cash clients on indefinite hiatus, I’ve been applying steadily to freelance positions advertised on journalism websites, Linked In and the like. The most interesting was for a “with” ghostwriting gig, as in The Perfect Assassin by James Patterson with Brian Sitts. The company in question provides the plots, then pays a writer to flesh out the details — dialogue, setting, etc.

They’re doing this in several genres so I applied for the fantasy gig. Last week I turned in a 1,000-word scene following their plot, and I think it was good, but they gave me a No at the start of this week. The problem may have been that my tone was urban fantasy when they wanted a Tolkien or George RR Martin vibe. Did I miss a golden opportunity? It would have certainly been more fun than most of my paying gigs and might have boosted my name recognition factor. On the other hand, I don’t know what length of book they wanted: the pay would have been good for 60,000 words, unsatisfying for 100,000. Plus it would come in three scheduled payments per book (one when the first quarter is done, one when the manuscript is done, one when revisions are finished or something like that). I don’t suspect them of chicanery but a new company might run out of funding before I got the cash.  Who knows?

Otherwise the week went well. I spent some time jotting down ideas for the next phase of Let No Man Put Asunder and got about 5,000 words done. I’m already thinking of revisions; if I hit my minimum for the month, 10,000 words, I may go back and polish everything, as I did with the first few chapters already.

I rewrote Mage’s Masquerade and I’m really pleased with it. I’ll print it out and do a final read in hard copy later in March.

I finished rereading The Impossible Takes a Little Longer and it’s much better than I thought. Not publishable but as I’d hoped, the story arc is largely there. I started jotting down notes on fixing things; a big one is a lot more intensity in my protagonist’s emotions. I’m putting her through the ringer but it’s not showing on the page.

I read the second half of Obolus to the writing group — well, I got about halfway through in the time allotted. That’s frustrating as I need feedback on the ending, so I’ll wait and read that part again at the next meeting. Otherwise the reading went great. They found it much improved over the draft I read them a couple of months back. One guy said my lines were so good that like Douglas Adams I distracted him from the flow of the story. I can live with that.

I also reread Oh the Places You’ll Go! which I intend to release as a solo short story. It looks good but it made take more editing to make it good enough.

That plus a little bit of research reading covers it, I think. Plus I had articles about comics writer Jim Shooter and a noteworthy Silver Age Hulk tale over at Atomic Junkshop. On Con-Tinual’s Facebook page I participated in a discussion about Wonder Woman, a topic you may have noticed I’m fond of.

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An unprofitable but productive week

“Unprofitable” in the literal sense: my writing cash flow is the lowest it’s been in a couple of years. One rejection today from a good-paying market. A possible client who said they’d be in touch has ghosted so I’m guessing they found a writer they liked better. But one of my rules is to keep writing even if the cash flow is low. I managed that.

I completed another chapter of Let No Man Put Asunder which puts it over the 10,000 words I wanted to finish this month. I do think I’ll have to go back and rewrite a couple of fight scenes — I was reading up on fight-scene construction today — but overall I’m very pleased.

Last week I mentioned I had problems with the mystery plot of Mage’s Masquerade and the villain’s motive for using a rather clumsy plan. Much to my surprise, when I sat down this week the solution came fairly quickly (I’ll blog about it soon). I think the story’s looking much better.

Plus I put in a lot of work on The History Arcane, including changing the title. I have enough 20th century works that I can make a slightly smaller anthology purely drawn from that era; I think that gives it a stronger feel so I’m going with it. The title is therefore changed to 19 ♾️, which one of my writing friends suggested (I forgot whom, alas). I also put in a lot of time with initial editing and straightening up the manuscript; some of the stories date back to when I’d use underlining to indicate italics rather than just italics (that’s how it used to be done). I’m also going to try for a bigger publicity push and see if I can sell more books. Though I did sell another digital copy of Questionable Minds this week — thank you, whoever you were!That’s pretty much it, but it’s a satisfactory work week. Two months into 2023 and it seems I still have game.

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The Story Behind The Story: Questionable Minds

As today is the launch date of my first published novel, Questionable Minds (available as an ebook or paperback), my usual Monday political post will go up tomorrow. For now, it’s the story of how I came to write it.IIRC, the original idea for what became Questionable Minds was born sometime in the early 1980s. I’d seen Sean Connery in The Great Train Robbery my junior or senior year at Oberlin and much enjoyed his role as the roguish thief organizing the first robbery from a moving train. In his trial, after a judge demands to know what could have led him to violate every principle of law and decency, Connery simply shrugs and says “I wanted the money.”

My initial idea was to take the Connery character (based on a real character in the Michael Crichton nonfiction account of the theft) and have him work for the government — go where the police can’t go, do things the police can’t, that sort of stuff. The initial adventure, prompted by some nonfiction I’d read, would have involved the Hindu Thuggee cult setting up shot in London. In hindsight I’m very glad I never sat down and wrote it as I can’t think of any way it wouldn’t have been racist as shit.

Instead the idea lay fallow in the back of my brain. When it finally resurfaced it had two key differences. First, my poacher-turned-gamekeeper protagonist had become Sir Simon Taggart, baronet, old-money and impeccable pillar of the establishment. Second, the concept that Simon lived in an England where psychic powers — mentalism — worked. My original concept had been intrusion fantasy — supernatural elements intruding into the mundane Victorian world — but my revised idea meant the world was no longer mundane.

What led to the change? I’m not sure, but most likely reading some of my reference books about the Victorian age jump-started my original idea.  The book’s villain became Jack the Ripper, then I threw in Jekyll and Hyde, Helena Blavatsky, and multiple other elements. Plus lots of borrowing from Arthur Conan Doyle, being the Holmes fan that I am.

At the time I finished the original draft — late 1990s, I believe — steampunk was still a new concept. I hoped building my book around psi powers rather than tech would make it stand out. League of Extraordinary Gentlemen hadn’t come out so me incorporating assorted fictional characters into the book would, I thought, be a plus too. Of course, as some of them were Sherlock Holmes characters (though not Holmes or Watson himself) and they were still under copyright, perhaps it’s good I didn’t sell it, though I imagine the publisher would have red-flagged that.

In any case it didn’t sell. I was particularly frustrated by one publisher who asked for like three chapters at a time, asked for more whenever I prodded them, then finally said no. That stretched the process out waaaay beyond what was reasonable.

Ditto a company who held the book for a long time, then told me, when I checked back, that they’d reserved it for the publisher’s personal review — expect an answer in four months. When six months passed I checked … and checked again … and again … and finally said that having had no answer, I chose to withdraw it from consideration. Late can happen for legit reasons; not responding when prodded is, in my experience, a huge red flag. The publisher’s curious response was that she was sorry we couldn’t reach an agreement — meaning what? They’d sent me an offer and I hadn’t heard back? Or that she and her people couldn’t reach an agreement whether to buy? I’m guessing the latter.

Finally, success! I submitted to an e-book publisher, got accepted and they told me they’d be back in touch by the following summer to discuss edits and possible changes. Summer passed, no contact. I checked back, they were going out of business. They apologized for not notifying me sooner but did return all rights.

I tried a couple more publishers after that without success, but I still believed the book was good (after all, at least one publisher liked it!). So finally, rather than chase after small publishers who probably didn’t have that much to offer me (not a slap at small publishers, honestly. But when the submission package calls for me to submit a marketing plan — well, if I could draw up marketing plans, I can’t see what I’d need them for) I opted to self-publish. I rewrote the book, rewrote again, edited the book and sent the manuscript through Draft2Digital for the ebooks (they’ll be available on Amazon eventually) and Amazon’s Kindle publishing for the paperback. Plus using One World Ink for promotional services. Plus, of course, my friend Samantha Collins who designed the awesome cover.

And now it’s done. Let’s see what happens …

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