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February in Review

Pretty good.
Thanks to eHow, I’m bringing in enough money to cover the added household costs, which makes both me and TYG very happy. Work on the Big Pulp series is going well (the first story should be up at the end of the month) and ditto Enemy Within (though I wish i were further along on both of them).
On the downside, I’ve applied for a bunch of local writing jobs, and nothing’s come of it so far. I’ll keep plugging away though. And one of them’s still up in the air, a freelance reporting gig for a business magazine (I’m not optimistic, but we’ll see).
And I submitted a guest column to The Log, just because I thought it needed saying (Reagan’s antiterrorist policies were to the left of Republicans today—too unacceptably left to be elected, IMHO), even though I no longer get paid for it.
For March? Basically more of the same: More of the shorts, more of eHow, more on the book. I’ve got a couple of ideas I’d like to get queries out on too, we’ll see if I can find a market.
And personally, as far as my life w/TYG is going? Awesome.

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Miscellaneous updates

•Ehow is going well, and I hope it will go better. I’ve done four or five hours already this week, and I hope to do more. If I work efficiently enough, it comes out to about $15/hour, which is quite satisfactory.
•A while back I’d e-mailed an editor about the past-due publication of the anthology including my Love That Moves the Sun. When I didn’t hear back, I began to suspect the worst, but it turns out he was sick, and everything is still on track, though delayed.
•Drollerie Press is looking at Champions of Darkness, which came out a couple of years ago in Tower of Light.
•Less satisfactorily, an editor who’s had Past Is Epilogue as an anthology submission for the past year has passed on it, though with positive comments. The unsatisfactory part is that he turned it down last May, and thought someone had notified me.
•I submitted Original Synergy to another market, but the Durham magazine I sent He Kindly Stopped For Me to is apparently not open for submissions yet.
•I’ve finished a complete draft of Enemy Within—complete as regards all the movies and TV shows I’ve seen so far, that is. It’s a little under 70,000 words, which is short, but I have much more material to review in the next two months.

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Another No

Questionable Minds came back again. I’m hopeful I’ll have it out again by week’s end—definitely before March.
And one of my shorts, Past is Epilogue, has been languishing at an anthology whose editor is always just about to get everything in order.
On the plus side, I went over the photos for Enemy Within, and I think I’ve got an excellent selection. I need more, but so far, it’s looking good.

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More viewing for The Enemy Within

Invaders From Mars is a 1986 remake of the creepy 1953 film in which a small boy discovers that Martians have taken control of his parents, his friends, the police … While there’s some good acting—Timothy Bottoms and Laraine Newman are quite creepy as the possessed parents—the high-powered special effects and spectacular Things Blow Up Real Good climax are a poor substitute for the eerie look William Cameron Menzies gave the original.
Strange Invaders (1983) is supposed to be a tribute to the fifties alien-invasion/body-snatcher films, as Paul LeMat discovers the town where his ex-wife mysteriously disappeared seems to be a hotbed of activity by disguised extraterrestrials. Unfortunately, while it has all the elements, it can’t seem to decide what to do with them: It’s not clever enough for a tribute and not effective enough to be taken straight. Plus, Nancy Allen’s performance as the female lead is awful.
Nowhere Man is an interesting TV series in which Bruce Greenwood steps out of a restaurant for a few seconds, then walks back in to discover nobody knows him, including his wife, his identification is gone and there’s no proof he ever existed. Cut off from everyone he knows, he sets out to learn the secrets of the organization behind it, and why they’re so interested in securing the negative of one of his photos. While a lot of the episodes were pretty dull, enough works that this was worth rewatching (and the sinister conspiracy definitely qualifies for my book).
Threshold is a terrific SF series that died much too soon: Aliens have sent a radio signal that genetically transforms humans into something more than human, with an obsessive desire to spread the infection to others; to stop the “bioforming” of Earth, a crack team headed by Carla Guggino is organized to fight back and control the infection. One I greatly enjoyed rewatching.

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Movies watched for The Enemy Within

First, the ones that didn’t make the cut:
MIMIC 2 (2001) is a sequel in which the protagonist of the original is now working as a science teacher, only to discover the super-insects of the first film have now mutated to the point of taking human shape. That angle doesn’t play in enough to qualify for my book, since it’s mostly about just running from the scary insect people rather than wondering Are You One Of Us Or …?
BLOWUP (1966) is the Antonioni film in which Anthony Hemmings’ discovery he’s photographed a murder almost jars him out of his aimless lifestyle. Works slightly better on rewatching than it did the first time, but it’s still more about style than substance.
ADVENTURES OF THE FLYING CADETS (1943) is a Boys Own-style serial in which four plucky pilot trainees are framed for murder by the Nazi assassin the Black Hangman (regrettably much more mundane than the name sounds) and forced to go on the lam to stop him. The descriptions I had of this made it sound like it was just possibly grist for my mill, but no, there is little of paranoia and not much of a Fifth Column, so I gave up about a third of the way through.
THE GROUNDSTAR CONSPIRACY (1972) is a good thriller in which George Peppard refuses to let double-agent Michael Sarrazin’s amnesia stop him from learning who Sarrazin worked for when he blew up a top-secret lab. Not paranoid enough for the book (the focus is on Sarrazin putting himself back together with help from Christine Belford) but good fun with Peppard as the man who suspects everyone as naturally as he breathes.
MURDER AT 1600 (1997) is a so-so thriller wherein homicide detective Wesley Snipes is assigned to investigate a White House staffer’s murder only to discover that it points right at First Son-or does it? Like SHADOW CONSPIRACY and THE SENTINEL this focuses more on replacing the president with an ambitious rival than a full Fifth Column scheme, so it doesn’t make the cut; with Diane Lane and Dennis Miller as Snipes’ sidekicks, and Daniel Benzali and Alan Alda as White House power players.
S*P*Y*S (1974) stars Donald Sutherland and Elliot Gould as respectively realist and idealist spies forced to team up when the KGB claims their heads in return for two of its own agents (“It’s the bilateral accord of 1972.”). Despite the obvious effort to cash-in on M*A*S*H, this is just recycled Bond-parody material that could have been made 10 years earlier.
Now the one that did:
CIVIC DUTY (2006) stars Peter Krause as an unemployed accountant who becomes increasingly obsessed with the Arab Terrorist Menace but can’t convince anyone that the Middle-Eastern grad student next door is obviously plotting something horrible. This works well, though the ending leaves me wondering if they’re trying to have it both ways or should be a sign as to how far Krause has gone off into delusion-land.

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My new life at two weeks

On the personal level, all goes well. Still no new job, but TYG and I seem to have adapted well to going from long-distance to live-in.
And I went over my bank account and it looks like I’m in good shape for expenses—I’d worried things were confused enough in the move that I’d lost track and had wound up overestimating my resources.
Writing wise, I’ve been making the most of my current jobless status, and actually put in more than 20 hours (which has been my norm since I started work on Enemy Within and the Big Pulp stories) last week. I hope to do as much this week. I think I’ve more than made up for the week I took off to pack, though I’m sorry to say I didn’t finish the second draft of Big Pulp #3, Who Was That Lady? (title will need to change due to the revisions I’ve made already) last month like I’d planned.
I’m also applying for various freelance Internet jobs, and I hope to work on one this afternoon. Not much money, but I’ve learned if I can grind them out fast, i can get a decent hourly rate.
And in that spirit: Back to work!

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Movies watched for The Enemy Within

First, I’m pleased to report that I’ve updated and polished up the introduction and the first four chapters (German, Japanese and Cold War Fifth Columnists—the Commies required two chapters). It’ll need more going over, particularly as I add movies to those chapters and as the book gets longer (I may wind up having to go back and trim), but it’s looking quite decent.
Now, the movies:
THE SENTINEL (2006) has Michael Douglas as a veteran Secret Service agent suspected of being the double-agent plotting to assassinate the president, but his real secret is a love affair with First Lady Kim Basinger. Perfectly adequate, but as it turns out, not one for the book.
GUILTY BY SUSPICION (1991) is one of those films that mistakes a premise for a plot, a by-the-numbers drama of screenwriter Robert deNiro discovering his brief association with the American Communist Party has HUAC wanting him to name names, then blacklisting him when he refuses. Definitely one for my book, but the kind of film where I react to every development with “Well, of course!”
Charlize Theron is THE ASTRONAUT’S WIFE (1999) who gets the oddest feeling spouse Johnny Depp hasn’t been the same since he lost contact with Earth for a couple of minutes in space. Ploddingly slow and dull, but merits at least a mention in my book.
INVASION OF THE POD PEOPLE (2007) is a direct-to-DVD piece (from the same people who brought us TRANSMORPHERS) in which the replacement of staff and models at an LA modeling agency leads to R-rated lesbian orgies (nothing over an R, though) and violence between the usual Are You One of Us, Or— paranoid fears. Feeble.
ACROSS THE PACIFIC (1942) is best known for reuniting John Huston, Humphrey Bogart, Mary Astor and Sidney Greenstreet after The Maltese Falcon but should be at least as well known as the first Pearl Harbor film, only to switch gears when Dec. 7, 1941 took place mid-filming, forcing them to shift their Japanese sabotage plot to the Panama Canal (and some rather awkward explanations why a Central American plantation is staffed entirely by Asians). A perfect fit for my book, for example by showing a completely Americanized Japanese college student as being really a die-hard loyalist to the Emperor.
THE PARALLAX VIEW (1972) is Alan J. Pakula’s exercise in political paranoia, as Warren Beatty discovers everyone who saw a second gunman at a political assassination has died mysteriously as the result of a sinister conspiracy we never do get to make sense of. Very much a product of its time in its vague but ominous suspicions and having the Parallax Corp. win out in the end; very good, in any case.
THE ENEMY WITHIN (1994) is a reworking of Seven Days in May with Jason Robards as a would-be military dictator and Forest Whitaker as the man working to prevent it with help from George Dzunda as a Russian spymaster (“We do not want to see a militarized United States.”), President Sam Wanamaker and Chief of Staff Dana Delaney. The scope of the scheme puts this in my book where straight assassination stories such as The Sentinel lose out.
THE HOLCROFT COVENANT (1985) doesn’t qualify as well as I’d thought—while Michael Caine’s Holcroft certainly has trouble figuring out which side his various associates are on, and a great many conflicting agendas are in play, there isn’t much in the way of infiltration and political paranoia. In its own right, competent, but not outstanding , though I do like Caine playing such an inept man of action.
MINISTRY OF FEAR (1945) has Ray Milland discover that merely by buying a cake, he’s plunged himself into a world where everyone from psychics to relief agencies is up to their knees in espionage; a solid thriller from Fritz Lang based on a Graham Greene book (I really must read some Greene one day).
INVASION OF THE BEE GIRLS (1973) remains one of my favorite bad films as a sexy mad scientist attempts to create a Fifth Column race of insectoid superwoman only to breed sterile sexpots whose insatiable lust causes men to drop dead of exhaustion during sex (triggering a lot of sexual paranoia). A decade later, this might have been an AIDS metaphor; as is, inept but entertaining.

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Endgame for 2009

It’s a good week to wrap up the year with, from my perspective: I was able to put in a full week of freelancing (i.e. 18 to 20 hours) for the first time since November (this includes working part of tomorrow, but I have faith I’ll deliver).
Atoms for Peace is ready to go to Big Pulp, though I’ll give it a final review and trim next month.
I got a ton of stuff watched for The Enemy Within, including episodes of Kindred: The Embraced—yes, the “vampires among us” element does merit at least some mention in my book (and the DVDs are out of my price range, so I’m glad Chiller Channel ran a marathon of them Monday).
I’ve applied for writing (and other) jobs in the Raleigh-Durham area—several this month, one new one today.
On the downside, Kernel of Truth needs more work. I’m not sure what, because everything seems to work, but my gut is screaming that I’m missing something. Much as I’d like to send it out, it’ll have to wait and hope I can figure out the problem soon.
And Love That Moves the Sun was supposed to come out this month, but the anthology is running late. Though I won’t freak yet—I’m used to delays in the short-story world.
As for the year as a whole? Hmm … I launched another nonfiction book (and one I’m much more passionate about than the parental-finances book I did in 2008), wrote in a lot more fiction than 2008, did one last dinner-theater show and, of course, got engaged to TYG. So I’ll mark 2009 up as a win.

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Progress report

Well, my energy is up enough to talk about something other than books, so …

Enemy Within is coming along well. Not progressing as fast as I’d like (I’m busy packing for my upcoming move to TYG—who’s now my fiancee—and dinner-theater rehearsals), but nothing I can’t catch up with.

•The first Big Pulp story got its beta-readings and generally received thumbs up. Number three (Who Was That Lady I Saw You With?) isn’t taking shape well. We’ll see how it goes this week.

•I have a possible reprint market for a story I wrote about five years back, Jack Be Nimble. I still like that one, so we’ll see how it does.

He Kindly Stopped For Me came back from the anthology I sent it to: The editor liked a lot of it, but wanted more at the end. I think I like the ending (it’s a bit anticlimactic, but intentionally so), so I’ll keep it, at least for now.

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More movies

When I checked my last Enemies Within post, I realized I’d skipped a few films …

What Is Communism? is an early sixties disinformational short in which Herb Philbrick (yes, he of I Led Three Lives fame) explains to the audience how Commies are evil schemers intent on world-domination and worst of all—they’re atheists! Because if you don’t believe in God, clearly there can be no limits to your evil.

Red Nightmare (1962) was a Jack Webb-produced thirty-minute film for the Department of Defense, in which an American blithely blowing off  his responsibilities to the PTA and the American Legion gets a nightmare about the horror that he would face if public apathy allowed the Reds to take over (much the same message as Invasion USA a decade earlier). See children denounce their parents to the authorities! Watch police ignore the Fourth Amendment! Gasp as Soviets turn the town church into a museum and take credit for inventing the telephone! Available on YouTube.

Rosemary’s Baby (1968) is fifth-column paranoia as seen through the eyes of expectant mother Mia Farrow, who realizes her husband, her friendly neighbors and her gynecologist are all part of a Satanist conspiracy involving her baby—though not quite for the reasons she thinks. Deserves its standing as a modern horror classic.

Shadow Conspiracy (1997) looked like it might be a fifth column story but no, it’s a fairly straight tale of political intrigue as a White House cabal opposed to the president’s policies plots to assassinate him. Can speechwriter Charlie Sheen and reporter Linda Hamilton save America?

Robert Heinlein’s The Puppet Masters (1994) is certainly an improvement on the earlier adaptation, The Brain Eaters, but this story of alien parasites taking over  first a small town, then a state, then their own army is still pretty mediocre. Less paranoid than the source novel and most of the changes (the aliens being a hive mind, for instance) add nothing.

Mr. Moto’s Last Warning (1939) isn’t really a fifth column story, but after all the anti-Japanese films I’ve seen, it’s interesting to watch one with a Japanese hero (even played by Peter Lorre)—and amazing that even this late in the decade, the enemy spies pointedly do not identify the nation employing them.

I’d thought The Lottery (1994) might qualify as a paranoid story of supernatural infiltration, but it turns out this adaptation of Shirley Jackson’s story is just a creepy tale of a small-town hiding a sinister cult a la Dark Secret of Harvest Home. Competently done, though.

Strange Holiday (1945) shows how some fifth-column themes adapt to any enemy threat: This story originally had Claude Rains discovering that while he blew off the war effort to go camping, Nazis took over his town; with a little editing to remove the Nazi references, this ran in the 1950s when the infiltrators would obviously have been Reds. Another one out there on YouTube.

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