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Jekyll and Hyde: That Henry Jekyll is one mean mother—

As part of my proposal to McFarland for a Jekyll and Hyde movie book, I’m giving them a sample chapter looking at the 1932 Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. As I wrote last year, the part of the film where Hyde (Fredric March) abuses and gaslights Ivy (Miriam Hopkins) is not only horrifying to watch but makes Jekyll much less sympathetic.Hyde, after all, is Jekyll’s way of acting out his more sinful desires without getting caught. He’s sexually frustrated not being able to sleep with his fiancee Muriel (Rose Hobart) but he doesn’t want to risk the scandal of taking a lover. By becoming Hyde he’s free, but he also free other impulses too. Hyde like hurting people with little provocation; he’s Jekyll’s lizard brain, his id, completely stripped off inhibitions. As the film progresses, Hyde’s apish form becomes more bestial; so it seems is his conduct.

This is in keeping with the Victorian view that criminal, violent behavior represented a lower level of evolution than the middle and upper class Victorian white men; a career criminal was an evolutionary throwback to the level of an African savage (blacks are not, of course, a lower evolutionary level, nor are they more brutal or criminal than white people). In mutated form, the idea that our rationality is at war with our more animalistic side is still around. The point in the film is not that Jekyll’s a monster but that we’ve all got the capacity for evil and inhumanity; when Hyde is Jekyll those impulses are in check. Rose is not at risk.

Rewatching the film, I don’t think that absolves Jekyll. The film wants us to have sympathy for him: Mamoulian cut one scene from the script, showing Jekyll paying off the father of a girl Hyde trampled on, because it makes him look bad. Maybe he wouldn’t ever do that as himself but he’s not too troubled by having done it as Hyde. The same is true of the abuse: he’s willing to keep turning into Hyde so he can have sex with Ivy, even though he knows what Hyde’s doing to her. The movie avoids making Jekyll look like a villain because we don’t see him from his first seduction of Ivy through the moment Muriel, absent with her father, returns to town. When Ivy come to him shortly afterwards, he’s troubled by her suffering but he obviously wasn’t troubled enough to stop as long as he needed a sexual outlet. I wondered if maybe he’d stayed Hyde but Poole (Edgar Norton), his butler, references seeing his master occasionally so Jekyll did change back and forth.

I don’t think there’s any way not to see Jekyll as a villain rather than a tragic figure, though even if unintended, thgat fits with the shallow hypocrite of Stevenson’s novel.

The movie’s critique of Victorian stuffiness and hypocrisy is also off. Jekyll’s friend Lanyon (Holmes Herbert) is a stuffy conformist who doesn’t approve of Jekyll spending so much time on charity work and doesn’t see any need for science to advance the human condition. At the end, he comes off as the voice of reason: Jekyll’s non-conformity, his pushing back against the era’s mores, his reluctance to rein in his passions, are flaws; there’s no distinction between the good side (his impassioned desire for Rose) and the evil side that manifests in Hyde. Like so many other mad scientists, Jekyll’s positive aspects (by today’s standards) are tinged with folly because they led to him, as he says at one point, trespassing in God’s domain.

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March came in like a lion and alas, came out like a lion

As I wrote last week I knew this last week of March wouldn’t let me catch up completely on what I didn’t get done this month. I caught up less than that.

Some of this was fun. TYG is a big fan of Rhiannon Giddens so we caught a Giddens concert Tuesday night. That led to us getting in late which wiped me out for the next day. Worth it though. Most of it was Plush Dog. The glaucoma the vet diagnosed last week requires a lot of eyedrops and they have to be put in with gaps between them. This expands dog care to take in an extra half-hour in the morning. And at lunch. And in the evening. Plus she was concerned he was hurting which led to us going to the eye vet yesterday, using up a chunk of time. Though it was the right call: the Plush One had a small scratch on his eye, nothing disastrous but it requires added drops so it doesn’t hurt him.

Plus I had my own eye appointment Thursday afternoon, with dilation. Which meant it wasn’t comfortable staring at my computer or reading so that was it for work.

I did get an article in at The Local Reporter on the challenges of relocating a bricks-and-mortar business. I also conducted an interview for what will probably be a story for next week. Over at Atomic Junk Shop I blogged about several random stories that caught my interest. The debut of the Legion of Superheroes foe Mordru on the cover above was one of them; so was Superman (below) dying of Virus X.Both covers are by Neal Adams.

I did manage to get some good work done on top of that. I completed a rough draft of my proposal to McFarland for a Jekyll and Hyde book. Seeing how much time I put in on it makes me wonder if this is a good idea — it’ll suck up way more time than I anticipate — but having already pitched them on the idea, I might as well press forward.

I also did some work on Southern Discomfort. Mostly it was going through the first 100 pages, which I’d already proofed, and eliminating most of the compound sentences linked by “but.” I’ve discovered proofing it that I overuse that sentence structure. The rewriting kept some of them but eliminated most of them one way or another. Surprisingly the changes also trimmed a couple of hundred words.

Oh well. I’m starting to adapt to Plushie’s new schedule. I have no medical appointments planned for next month. Let’s see if I can get myself back on track.

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Well damn, I thought this would be a much more productive week

Not perfectly productive as it was my birthday week. I took my birthday off as I usually do and it went great. I made it a point not to do the normal things I do on a day off: I shopped for new sneakers, wandered around Barnes & Noble, wandered around the rest of the mall, bicycled and sat out on our deck to enjoy the garden. Nothing spectacular but TYG was working and we had dog physical rehab that morning. Relaxing made more sense, and it felt good.

I thought I’d be able to squeeze some solid work into the rest of the week but somehow I couldn’t quite muster the energy. I suspect the early pollen hit me with the kind of allergic whammy I used to get back in Florida: no sneezing, just a sense of exhaustion. It didn’t use to affect me that way here but I guess climate change is doing its magic.

Plus this morning TYG took Plushie in to the vet, concerned he had an eye problem. She has a keen sense of such things: the vet sent us to the animal eye doctor over in Cary who confirmed he has glaucoma. We came home with a bunch of drops which may be able to keep him seeing for a while yet. That used up a lot of today.
I got a couple of articles done for The Local Reporter. One on a local woman who gave her son a kidney and now fights to increase live-organ kidney donations. I discovered talking to her that it’s now possible to work organ swaps — if A isn’t a compatible donor to B and C can’t donate to D, sometimes C and A can swap recipients so that both recipients have a compatible organ.

I also wrote an article on Tuesday’s Carrboro town council meeting. While I can watch it streaming now, it’s a pain in the butt because it’s always slow going to get everything worth covering down. It’s not really worth the pay rate but I think local coverage is worth the effort.Other than that, I got a little work done on Let No Man Put Asunder and Savage Adventures. I also rewatched the 1931 Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde to give a detailed discussion in my Mcfarland book proposal.

And I got two stories in at Atomic Junk Shop, one about a couple of war comics of interest and one about the end of Batman’s New Look era. Here’s one shot of the Rogue’s Gallery gathering together, courtesy of Chic Stone.

And now I’m staring at the last week of the month and feeling I definitely won’t get everything done I wanted to. But I’ll do what I can.

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American Airlines threw me off balance

Last weekend I went down to Greenville SC for their annual Mensa gathering. TYG, who would usually drive, stayed behind because after Plushie’s last injury she can’t bear the thought of him getting hurt when he’s with a dog-sitter who might not take care of him as well as we do (I miss traveling with her but I can’t say she doesn’t have a point). As she has no faith in my driving she convinced me to fly rather than drive the four hours. Much as I hate spending the money to fly, the trip down went smoothly, though I wound up traveling in the dark before dawn.

The trip back left me stuck for four or five hours in the Greensville-Spartansburg Airport as we waited for the plane. And waited. And waited. Below is the gate just minutes before one of the supposed boarding times.That the plane wasn’t anywhere near the gate was a clear sign we’d been denied, yet again. And the airport has a piss-poor selection of places to eat and no Starbucks — not that I drink coffee but at least they have decent tea. This place? The best I could find was Constant Comment.

Instead of getting at 3:30-4 in the afternoon and unwinding I got in 10:30. I spent a lot of Monday catching up on odds and ends and getting unwound which cost me most of the day. That threw off the rest of the week.

I did get the rewrite on the first chapter of Let No Man Put Asunder finished and started Ch.2. I did a lot of work for The Local Reporter — more time than I wanted to spend, due to feeling so off. But I did get in a story on new development and got an interview for my story for next week.

The rest of time I spent primarily on research reading. It was the right move, but disappointing. And next week I’m taking Monday off for my birthday so I lose another day.

Oh well. I intend to have a fun birthday, then apply myself with vigor. We’ll see how it goes. More photos from Mensa will go up soon.

I thought I’d wrap up with this 2019 photo of Wisp, when she was still an outside cat.

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Two good weeks in a row? Woot!

I’ve often thought that dimension riding in Nine Princes in Amber and its sequels was a good metaphor for life. Get your mind set on the destination you want, start to shift, adjust as you go. Your goal is golden sands under a yellow sky with a forest behind you. Your first shift gets you the forest but blue skies overhead and no beach to speak of. Second shift gets the beach but the forest is now shrubs. Next shift gets you everything but the sky’s color. And so on.Similarly I had a good writing week but didn’t get anything up at Atomic Junk Shop and only had one story at The Local Reporter, about Carrboro planning to charge for public parking. But my more personal work went really well.

I worked on Savage Adventures, editing my analysis of the old Doc Savage pulps through 1940 (which ends with the ingenious lost race story, The Men Vanished). I noted several questions I’ll have to reread the stories to check but otherwise I’m done for that section.

I rewrote part of Southern Discomfort to make some of the historical details more comprehensible, something I’ll be blogging about in more detail soon.

I sent off three short stories to different markets. The third, All Happy Families, was one I set aside a while ago but looking at it recently I think it’s in good shape as is, so …

I spent a lot of time thinking about Let No Man Put Asunder. For me second draft is still pantsing but I did draft a rough outline, work on the setting (the fictional city of Bluestone, Pa.) and a rough rewrite of the opening scenes.

It feels good, particularly as I took today off for some personal errands. Also feeling good: I sold a copy of one of my paperbacks off Amazon. I can’t figure out which — Amazon’s sales reports are frustratingly opaque — but whoever you are, thank you.

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Trixie turned ten this week

Well, as best the vets can estimate with a stray taken to the shelter at eight months old. I don’t know what awful person dumped her on the street but I guess I owe them one because she’s my little angel.If she has any flaw it’s that she can be very stoic when she’s in pain and sometimes we miss it. Plushie’s a cry-baby when he’s hurt but that makes it easier to know there’s a problem.Work this week went well. At Atomic Junk Shop, I look back at the moment Roy Thomas began indulging his two obsessions, the Golden Age and continuity problems. I also take a look at the debut of DC’s Creeper.
At The Local Reporter I wrote about development in Carrboro and a black oral history project, From the Rock Wall.

My own stuff went well too. I got more work done on Southern Discomfort and proofed Savage Adventures through the 1935 material. I also sat down and did some thinking about Let No Man Put Asunder, both the backstory (what degree was Paul working for when things fell apart?) and some of the structure. I’m not sure if I’m ready to start writing yet, but I am pleased with the work I did.

I did some more work on my self-publishing plans, writing back-cover copy for Savage Adventures and Southern Discomfort. I also came into some money which will cover the cost of setting up a Behold the Book website. I’m trying to figure out the design now, using a WordPress theme (I don’t want to spend money on anything custom).

Those of us working on the Ceaseless Way collaborative anthology held a Zoom call last weekend. It was a big help: we have a deadline (September) and a list of what needs to be done. We’ve started work on the list.

I did not get the exercising done I wanted but I’m pleased overall.

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The new normal is working out okay

As I wrote a week ago, even though Plushie’s back is better, we’re not going to let him run up and down the stairs or jump off the couch the way we used to (occasionally he’ll manage it but not often). That means lots of time sitting with him in the cage on the floor while I work or (this afternoon) on a caged couch with him (TYG sits on the couch with him too). It’s not ideal but we’re making it work. This means Trixie sometimes winds up sitting alone for longer than usual; she’s on the couch too this afternoon and very needy. It’s hard to refuse her demands for petting because she’s my little girl and she’s very cute.The dogs weren’t as distracting as taking the car in to get some preventive maintenance done yesterday. I brought work but after three hours (I could have gone home to wait but the drive would have wasted more time) my mind simply ran out of steam. I didn’t regain steam when I finally got home so my day was largely shot. Frustrating.

Still, I got a fair amount of work done. I wrote a profile of Chapel Hill’s first female police chief for The Local Reporter. I edited more of Southern Discomfort and read one section to the writing group. As always the feedback was helpful and I edited further based on it. I’ve almost completed February’s portion of the editing on Savage Adventures. I highlighted a few details I’ll need to skim the original Doc Savage stories to check; I’ll get to that next week.Over at Atomic Junk Shop I wrote a post how the seemingly shocking changes to comics in 1968 now look less startling almost 60 years later and a second about Batman’s foe Anarky and the Son of Satan’s foes the Legion of Nihilists.

Oh, and I sold one of my paperbacks though due to Amazon’s reporting methods I don’t know which of these books it is yet, or how many. But whoever you are, if you’re reading this post, thanks for buying.

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That’s a little more like it!

The best work-week I’ve had in a while.

I can thank TYG for a lot of that. She decided she missed Plushie so she spent a lot of the week sitting with him next to her on the couch. That’s easier for her than me as I’m never so busy I can’t break off and fetch her stuff if she needs a Diet Coke or whatever. But it’s way better for me. I go up to my office and don’t have to deal with the awkwardness of sitting Plushie’s cage or with Trixie or Wisp looking at me with sad eyes. The end result? Much more clarity for work.Sleep helped a lot too. I had some really bad nights but it got to the point my body decided to sleep late — that’s rare — and I felt much better for it (who’d have guessed?). With TYG keeping the dogs occupied much of the week, it was also easier for me to find time to exercise.

I still didn’t write anything new but I did get some creative work done. I finished rereading Let No Man Put Asunder‘s first draft and noting down how to improve it. It’s in much better shape than most of my first drafts but as it goes along I lose Mandy’s character arc (Paul’s holds up somewhat better) and that needs to change. And while the plot is action oriented, the plot’s really a mystery — why is this happening to Mandy and Paul? Keeping that in mind and advancing the solution as it goes along will help the next draft a lot (see this old post of mine for discussion).

I also started copy-editing Southern Discomfort: I printed out the first 100 pages and I made it through the first forty, reading them aloud and noting errors/problems/overused phrases, etc. Working on that made me feel I’m really getting my mojo back.

Work for The Local Reporter once again got heavier than planned. I got in two stories, one about l0cal pandemic history, one about Carrboro renaming a street to honor a local civil-rights activist rather than a white supremacist. And my editor told me I’m amazing.Over at Atomic Junk Shop I discussed encountering old tropes when they’re new to you, the muddled end of the Silver Age Metamorpho comic book (cut off in mid-reboot) and some more 1968 changes and reboots including the X-Men dealing with the death of Professor X. Yes, he turned out alive later but I think it was still a daring move on Roy Thomas’ part. And while I’m not fond of Don Heck’s superhero art, I think he captures the tragedy of the moment. Oh, and the Durham Writers MeetUp Group — my specfic writing group is under their umbrella — is in need of a new admin, so I volunteered. It doesn’t sound like too much work; I’m waiting for the current administrator to get back to me about what I need to do to take over. Wish me luck.

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February rises like a phoenix…maybe

Plushie is still in his cage, I’m still spending a lot of time in there with him, and it’s still slowing me down, as is the loss of my morning routine (see the link for details). It’s unsurprising the last three days of January did not explode with productivity. I’d gotten very little of what I wanted done last month and that fed the fatalist sense there was no point in trying. February, however, has started off pretty well. I was determined to get some creative work done this week so I focused on rereading my first draft of Let No Man Put Asunder. It’s pretty good for one of my first drafts, with character arcs and story arc moving along well. I got about 30,000 words in; if I’m write, it’s after this chapter that things run a lot less smoothly. Still, I’m satisfied I haven’t been wasting my time. I also reread the feedback from my writing group and noted where I agreed with their criticisms, which I usually do. Fortunately there’s nothing they said that isn’t fixable, like a sense in one chapter the stakes aren’t high enough.

Beyond that I got in a couple of Local Reporter articles, one on Chapel Hill’s  plans for renovating some of its recreational facilities and a roundup on Carrboro’s town council meeting. Over at Atomic Junk Shop I posted about DC writer Bob Haney possibly mocking himself,  the overuse of old pulp villains and a sudden burst of reprints in DC Comics at the end of 1967. That includes Robin’s encounter with 50-50 Finlay, a story I found a lot of fun on rereading.Plushie’s still in his cage all of next week but I’m determined to get things done. Wish me luck, and have a great weekend.

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Being in a cage with Plushie much of the day is surprisingly exhausting

Don’t get me wrong, it’s no fun for Plushie either.I don’t blame him for barking his head off when we leave him alone in there, but even with a husband pillow for support, the back strain from sitting in there does not make my mind sharp. Nor does having even less privacy in the early morning than when Wisp accompanies me downstairs. As I said last week, the morning is now TYG, Wisp, Trixie and Plushie and it’s much harder to get my head in the game.

Like last week, not much got accomplished. A lot of it was work for The Local Reporter so it’s paying, if nothing else. But I hate getting so little of my own work done. The article on Chapel Hill’s short-term rentals ordinance probably isn’t much interest outside city limits but my article on HonorBridge, an organ-procurement organization for transplant hospitals, is pretty cool. Below you can see a startlingly realistic dummy from their simulation room, where they train staff to keep brain-dead corpses viable for transplants.Over at Atomic Junk Shop I looked at a warden who does a sloppy job caging super-villains and a couple of ridiculous scenes from Daredevil.The Trapster’s paste is strong enough to hold the Thing. Nail polish is not going to remove it but apparently artist Gene Colan didn’t know that.

I did manage to get back into the swing of exercise and stretching, which is good — I really can’t afford to slack off on that stuff.

Tiring and frustrating overall. Plushie is making excellent progress but it’ll be two and a half weeks before he’s out of the cage. I do not intend to wait that long to be productive. Wish me luck delivering on that.

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