Monthly Archives: May 2010

Teasing and hints

Last weekend I finished Astro City: The Dark Age, a 16-issue long arc in the Astro City universe which takes the characters from the seventies—when comics were starting to get darker and grimmer—into the eighties as the “grim and gritty” tone became far more dominant. Although in Astro City, the arrival of the super-hero Samaritan turned things around sooner than in the DC or Marvel universes.
The Dark Age also tells something author Kurt Busiek has been hinting about since the second issue of the series, about 15 years ago: The tragedy of the Silver Agent. The Agent, a Captain America-like hero who embodies the comic-book heroic ideal (I’ve always assumed the name is a variation on the Silver Age) appears in issue 2 and the narrator comments about how amazing he was and how nobody imagined what would happen to him later.
A lot of fans were curious. I wasn’t reading the book yet, but there’s another story later where we see a statue of the agent and an epitaph, “To Our Eternal Shame.” That did get me curious. And years later, we finally learn what happened (no, I’m not going to tell you here—go read it!).
I think there’s often a temptation in fiction to keep the balls in the air as much as possible. Keep the mystery mysterious. Keep the sexual tension tense. Don’t resolve it because what will you do for a story then?
This is also a huge mistake. I’ve come close to dropping Lost several times over the years because they took so damn long to explain anything (and because the characters often seem insanely uncurious about putting the puzzle pieces together). The Lois Lane/Superman/Clark Kent triangle grew more and more awkward because it makes Lois look so “galactically stupid” (in the words of Lois and Clark [of course, she’s anything but, being the only person in Metropolis to have figured out Clark is Superman]). And countless TV series have sweated and strained to keep the protagonists apart to keep the sexual tension up, and eventually it gets ridiculous (I was so pleased to see Chuck finally resolve Chuck and Sarah).
The same thing is true of premises in general: At some point it’s necessary to realize that what started the series has to go. As I blogged about The Invaders, the series had to twist and contort its logic to rationalize that David Vincent could never prove to the authorities that Earth was being invaded.
Compare that to Alias, which solves the problem of Sydney Bristow working as a double-agent inside SD-6 (can she keep sabotaging her missions without them suspecting anything?) by eventually taking the organization down.
Spider-Man suffers from being betwixt and between: The series’ Silver Age run was famous for being willing to change things: Peter ages, graduates high school and goes to college, and changes from the shy unloved geek to a guy with close friends and a beautiful girlfriend. The running problem for later writers, as detailed in Spider-Man Confidential, is how to keep things changeable and surprising while also keeping Peter from becoming successful, content and happy (the other key to the series’ success being that with all his powers, Peter still winds up with the short end of the lollipop). It’s a tough act to pull off.
The Silver Agent mystery worked because he was only a minor mystery, never part of the Astro City backbone and only used occasionally before the resolution. Most writers aren’t that lucky.

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Census Like Me

Ever see Dead Like Me? Every morning, Mandy Patinkin’s crew of reapers would gather at a pancake house and receive the assignments of souls they had to take that day. Meeting for the census job at McDonalds is sort of like that. Except for the soul-taking, of course.
The first day, we had far fewer assignments than the crew leaders had expected, so I wound up with only one (which I won’t detail—giving out details about who we talk to is absolutely verboten and also illegal. Which was good—more time for other stuff, and I spent the evening working at home with TYG—but somehow I wound up with more wasted time and less eHows done than I’d planned (you know how it sometimes is when your schedule gets disrupted) and I think my take for the day was less than if I’d sat at home doing eHows).
The lessons: Take that lunch break! It really does refresh the mind. And if I’m midway through an eHow and decide it’s unworkable, in hindsight it’s better to save it for the next day before making a final decision (waking this morning, I’m thinking it might have been salvageable).
On the plus side again, Fire From Space, the fourth Applied Science story, is looking really good, and I’ll have no trouble getting it in on deadline. Though it turned a little darker and more noirish at the end.

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Books I’ve been reading

HAMLET IN PURGATORY by Stephen Greenblat is a hodge-podge of idea variously including the English rejection of the Papist superstition of Purgatory, the treatment of ghosts in Elizabethan theater and the crux of his argument, whether Hamlet’s father should be seen as a spirit in Purgatory (“A Catholic ghost confronting a Protestant prince.”). The end result includes lots of good bits-I didn’t know that one of the criticisms of Purgatory was that if the Church could free the tormented souls, they shouldn’t wait for people to pay them money to do it-but ultimately goes nowhere; as Greenblatt admits, the question of Catholic themes in Shakespeare has been covered before, the conclusion can’t be definitive, and his broader argument that Purgatory is more a creation of poetry and imagination than faith never amounts to much.
TEA: Addiction, Exploitation and Empire by Roy Moxham, chronicles how a Chinese drink regarded as a curiosity in the 17th century, then a luxury, wound up becoming an item of mass consumption in subsequent centuries, leading to such side-effects as widespread tea smuggling, the Boston Tea Party, Opium Wars and the brutal exploitation of tea-pickers to keep prices down (Moxham notes that while conditions are much better today, there’s such a glut of overproduction that wages are still dreadful). Good, though probably more interesting to a tea-lover than the general public.
THE VALLEY SO LOW is a collection of Manley Wade Wellman’s (whom I was startled to realize lived in Chapel Hill not far from me) final Southern stories, starting with “Trill Coster’s Burden” and several more Silver John shorts and following them up with other tales of mountain folk battling witch folk, monsters, demons, evil cults and haunts. Even with stories where you can see what’s coming such as the vampire tale “Chastel,” Wellman makes it readable, though most of his protagonists lack the screen presence John had (you could swap Hal Corbett and Lee Stryker in any of their stories without making a difference), and this suffers the usual problems of reading multiple stories in a row (the details of making an old-time log cabin get hideously repetitive when they’re in so many tales in a row).

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The Wages of Sloth

So I consoled myself for goofing off this week by reminding myself I could really crack down Friday after census training was finished.
Only my fingerprints didn’t take—apparently I’m one of those people who have very faint prints—so I have to run in and get an electronic scan made at the census office this morning. And then run an errand for TYG. Which makes it unlikely I’ll finish a draft of #4 today.
Bother.

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What I like about eHow

Writing eHow articles is a mixed bag for me. If I’m tired, if I have to make a bunch of revisions on several articles in a row, if I do too many of them in a shot, or I spend 30 minutes researching and not getting anywhere, I feel like it’s the worst investment of time imaginable.
At other times, when the research is easy and I learn stuff I didn’t know, it’s a blast.
A lot of times when choosing articles, I’ll look for a specific field—animals, history, performing arts—so I can find something I like (although quite a few articles have only a tenuous relationship with the category they’re in, and have to be reassigned while writing). At other times it’s just interesting to go down the list and cherry-pick something I’ve never heard of that sounds intriguing. That’s how I wound up writing today on “reactionary colorblindness” and identifying the shingles on your roof (so you can find the matching brand if you have to replace some), and yesterday I wrote an article on Schiller’s theories of aesthetic impotence.
There are worse ways to spend my time. And even working for the paper, I didn’t make as much per hour as I do on a good day of eHowing.
I’m sort of looking forward to census work (my only regret is that a lot of it will be done when I’d normally be with TYG) for a change of pace, but it’s nice to know eHow is there as well.

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Writing politics

As I mentioned last week, I’ve been participating in panels at the online CoyoteCon. During the discussion Friday night about political writing, someone asked how you tackle current politics without looking dated a few years later.
It’s a valid question. It’s true that many issues—presidential power, government corruption, the role of religion, the government spying on its own citizens—have been around for years, but the way the issues are expressed varies from generation to generation. And for all that human beings are much the same across time, believable people arguing outdated political issues is still going to look dated. As Richard Hofstadter observed in one of his essays (collected in The Paranoid Style in American Politics), the bimetallic question of the 1890s (should US currency be on the gold standard or the silver and gold standard?) which was white hot at the time (as witness William Jennings Bryant’s speech about “No crown of thorns, no cross of gold!”) is pretty much incomprehensible today.
Or take Larry Beinhart’s American Hero, on which the movie Wag the Dog was based: It’s a terrific book, but will a book proposing that the first Gulf War was a staged event designed to secure Bush I’s re-election hold interest as time goes by? Would anyone born after Desert Storm be interested? Does All the President’s Men work for twentysomethings?
As I’ve blogged about before, the way things become dated and the way people respond to topical references—parodies, in-jokes, cultural references—fascinates me. And I realized after the panel that I’d never thought much about it in serious political writing.
My conclusion, which I partly expressed at the time, is: Don’t worry about it. If your characters are real and believable and the situation is interesting, maybe it will stay relevant—particularly if you’re writing SF and fantasy, where you aren’t tied to any particular event or setting. Keith Laumer’s story “Bullets and Ballots,” for instance, was written 40 years ago, but the story of diplomats trying to stage a fair election in a strife-torn world still seems current. So does John Carpenters late-eighties film They Live, with its economic exploitation message (the film’s terrible despite the theme, however).
If not—well, no matter what we do or how hard we try, there’s nothing that will guarantee we’re writing for the ages, or even for a few years down the line. All we can do is write the best stories we can.
And no question, there’s a merit to using fiction to tackle current issues (whether or not it’s done well is another matter). And it can help sell the story, which is not an inconsiderable thing either.
So I figure forge ahead, and if you’re story is still being read a few years down the road, that’s just gravy.

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Books I’ve been reading

THE LADY IN THE LAKE has Philip Marlowe hired by a wealthy businessman to find out why the guy’s straying wife has Mysteriously Disappeared, which turns into a murder case when her body is found floating under the docks at their lakeside cabin. A good one, much improved on the short stories Chandler adapted it from, though reading several of his novels in close succession makes me conscious how often Bad Girls are to blame for everything—of the four novels I’ve read, a woman has been the main killer in three and the root of all evil in the fourth.
THE LEGION COMPANION by Greg Costigan is a history of the Legion of Super-Heroes in the form of interviews with pretty much everyone who ever worked on the series. The first third of the book is weak since it consists of recycled old interviews with deceased guys who worked on the book back in the fifties, and so doesn’t focus on the Legion at all; later interviews are more pertinent as writers chronicle the backstage decisions that led to characters being introduced, killed (“You have to kill a major character once in a while or they’ll assume the deaths will all be nobodies like Chemical King.”) and eventually the whole series being retconned multiple times. Informative, though obviously of no interest to non-fans.
A bored gentleman named Maskull takes A VOYAGE TO ARCTURUS in David Lindsay’s manichaean fantasy, wandering among among increasingly weird aliens and landscapes as he tries to find the Supreme Creator Surtur only to get increasingly conflicting views of who’s world it is and who’s pulling the strings. Reminiscent of George McDonald, this works well as a vivid, though rather episodic fantasy odyssey regardless of the underlying religious themes, though Lindsay’s 1920s theorizing about the Essential Nature of Women gets tediouis.
CONSPIRACY CULTURE: From Kennedy to the X-Files by Peter Knight argues that conspiracy theory has transferred itself from the world of political paranoia into an everyday part of the zeitgeist where people take it as a general given that even if a particular event isn’t a conspiracy, there’s one out there somewhere, and that refusing to see the threat proves your part of the sheeple. This was quite useful for The Enemy Within as it covers strains in feminist thinking that tie in to Stepford Wives (“Over and over, feminists describe the patriarchal system as a conspiracy, but insist it’s not a literal one.”) and The X-Files, but ultimately less interesting than Voodoo Histories (among other things, Knight writes like this was his sociology thesis).
THE SCAR was China Mieville’s direct sequel to Perdido Street Station in which a minor character fleeing the fallout from the first book’s events winds up shanghaid onto Armada, a floating pirate city where there are huge chains hanging below the ship and the leaders seem obsessed with mythological research on something very, very large …Very good (better than the follow up Iron Council).
ONLY A THEORY: Evolution and the Battle for America’s Soul by Kenneth Miller argues that the defeat of evolution by Intelligent Design (or even a presentation as two theories of equal merit) would be Only The Beginning, since the ID advocates admit that secular science in general is just as objectionable. Miller does a fine job showing both why the Intelligent Design argument against evolution sounds so logical, and why it turns out so wrong (“ID advocates say flaws in our genes are because we’ve degraded since the original design—but why do we and chimpanzees have the exact same flaws on the exact same genes?”), and arguing that non-scientific argument Evolution Means We’re Mere Animals has more emotional power than most scientists credit, and needs to be countered too, on the grounds it has more emotional punch than scientists realize. Miller becomes a whole lot weaker when he blames the whole thing on multiculturalism (arguing that “teach both sides of the controversy” is no different from attacks on books written by Dead White Males) and that evolution is essentially a right-wing theory (“If I wanted to show Darwin evolution in action, I’d take him to Wall Street.”). Overall, satisfactory, though.
I didn’t buy many of Marvel Comics’ horror books in my teens, but the trade paperback reprints have made it possible to revisit them now: THE ESSENTIAL GHOST RIDER Vol. 1 tells how Johnny Blaze was cursed by Satan and proceeds to spend his time fending off various demons trying to steal his soul for good, while battling mortal foes such as Zodiac, the Orb, Death’s Head and the Trapster. An entertaining collection from a period when Johnny swung between horror-protagonist and super-hero (horror eventually won out).

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Whither next?

Which is to say, now that the book is done, what do I do with my time?
For the immediate future, I’m doing more eHows, and I’ll start training as a census enumerator next week, which will bring in a few weeks of added pay.
Fiction-wise, I’m focusing on the Applied Science series. Between the move and the book, I’m nowhere near where I should be on stories four through seven, and getting them finished (in the case of five and six, getting the first draft done) is a top priority.
And this weekend and a couple more times this month, I’m participating in Coyote Con, an online virtual SF convention sponsored by Drollerie Press. I’ll be one of the speakers for Friday night’s session on Writing Politically (something I’ve done the greater part of my life) and Sunday’s 2pm session on creating your own religion (in fiction, not in the real world).
For the long run? Well, I’m not sure. I definitely want to bring in more money (and need to, given my COBRA insurance premiums) and I definitely want to spend more time on fiction—not only the Applied Science series, but other stories, Brain From Outer Space, more active marketing of the stories I’ve already written.
Beyond that, it’s hard to say. One of the local papers has said they’d consider any pitches I want to make, but I don’t know the area enough to have anything yet. I’d like to send out more article queries—an obvious way to make more money—and I’d love to have a couple more steady freelancing gigs like eHow. I’ve acquired a couple, but I’d need more to make a real go of freelancing.
And on the other hand, a steady day job would be useful if only to provide health insurance at a lower rate. Even a non-writing job that paid less than the eHow rate might be profitable when the insurance is factored in, though it means less time for writing (and ultimately, less time to snuggle with TYG).
So I guess it’s safe to say that while I know what I want, I don’t know how it’s going to play out. Which is unsettling, but I think I can live with it for now.

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This is extremely cool

The editor of an upcoming anthology of Jewish-themed fantasy actually asked me to send her “Where Angels Fear to Lunch,” a fantasy of mine from about 10 years ago that had been recommended to her. I feel quite flattered.

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