Monthly Archives: September 2009

50,000 words and counting

I did a rough estimate on my word count to date for The Enemy Within and it’s about 50,000 words or half my required minimum.

This makes me feel much better about the pace at which I’m going. After all, I haven’t even finished synopsizing the movies and TV shows yet, so there’s lots more to come, plus some insightful (let us hope) analysis.

That being said, it’s a long way from a polished 50,000 words. I still have questions about how I’m going to divide up the material—for example, should Arlington Road (Jeff Bridges vs. a conspiracy of far-right terrorists) be synopsized in a post-Cold War chapter or in a chapter on homegrown conspiracies?—and the 50,000 words needs lots of rewriting before I’ll be satisfied. But I think I’m on a good track.

I’ve also hit 30,000 words on Brain From Outer Space though that’s having to slow way down, between the Big Pulp stories and work on Enemy Within.

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Back again

Questionable Minds came back from Leucrota Press. I don’t feel too bad about it, since their objection was that they just didn’t like the premise. I never feel that reflects on the quality of the work, just the personal taste of the editor/reader.

Though it would be nice to have it go further, of course. So I shall permit myself a small sigh.

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It harrows me with dread and awe

I think I’ve mentioned that Big Pulp has accepted my short story Applied Science, which is the adapted first chapter of Brain From Outer Space.

If I didn’t mention it already, well, I am now.

Either way, along with telling me they liked it, the Pulpsters said that when they revamp the magazine Web site next year, they want to include a series running over several issues, rather than just unrelated stories. And since they thought my setting had potential and my writing was good, they asked if I’d be interested.

After a lot of questions and a lot of answers, I said yes. Honestly, what else could I say when someone asks me for more work?

It’s very cool and very exciting to get a shot like this; it’s also nerve-wracking. I’ve never had a deadline for my fiction before, so I’ve always been able to work, pause, rewrite, work, pause (repeat as needed) until it was ready. Having to get a story ready on time—not just once but multiple times—is scary as hell.

But it’s still exciting. It’s obviously good for me professionally, it’s good just to get more stories published, and it can’t hurt Brain From Outer Space when I finally finish it to have (hopefully) some fans of the setting. And it’s incredibly stimulating having a challenge someone else has set rather than just meeting my own goals.

Wish me luck!

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Blog tour achieved!

Here is David Sklar’s post on this month’s topic, music.

For anyone who’s new to my blog, hi. I’m Fraser, feel free to read my posts, check out my own cross-post in the tour or follow my What I’ve Written page to some of my fiction.

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I’ve always said I could learn an instrument if I really wanted to, and I’ve always wished I wanted to, but I never wanted it badly enough.  I can’t play an instrument, and I have a sonorous reading voice that turns into strangled geese when I sing.  I like to drum on tabletops, but that hardly counts.

In high school, when I learned that James Joyce said in Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man, that writing is the highest form of art, my first thought was, How arrogant! I mean, writing is my art form too, and I certainly love it, but I wouldn’t presume that what I do is the highest art just because of how it speaks to me.  And my second thought, was, No, it’s got to be music.

My son loves words.  He may be a writer some day; at 3 years old he already loves to tell stories, make up rhymes and puns, and to play around with concepts, especially turning men into women and women into men, through a pronoun shift–which he does loudly and brazenly, as if daring you to correct him.  When he was an infant in the NICU, with his lungs severely damaged by a traumatic birth, I would recite recite to him every poem I could think of, just so he could hear the sound of my breathing, the sound of my voice.  He still needs his stories every night, but if he’s really really upset, then nothing written by me or Shel Silverstein, Dr. Seuss or Maurice Sendak, can calm him down the way the song “Think About Your Troubles” by Harry Nilsson can.  And keep in mind, that’s not a CD, but my strangled-geese rendition.

The way I see it, language and literature are an outgrowth of nature.  Dolphins and prairie dogs can get some startlingly precise concepts across to one another, but the evolution of actual language is a significant part of what distinguishes us humans from all other beasts.  But music, to me, feels not like an outgrowth of nature but like a vibrant, living piece of nature itself.

Spoken language evolved for our survival.  Written language was developed for accounting.  When I see beauty in the world, my job as a writer is to seek out a way to describe and re-express that beauty through language–an imperfect tool.  But a musician, trying to describe that beauty instrumentally, works with a tool that is made for beauty, and has at his or her disposal an infinite vocabulary that is equipped for expressing beauty more directly than I ever can.

The most recent research seems to bear me out.  Children trained in music develop connections in their brains that other children do not have.  These same connections can develop in adults with the study of music.  Music is a first vocabulary that everyone understands; it is also the last, remaining even in those who have, through illness or injury, lost the capacity for speech.

So it shouldn’t be surprising that music plays a significant part in my work, in different ways.

In Shadow of the Antlered Bird, Tam uses the car radio to finish an incantation, using a snippet of a song to awaken April’s senses when she needs a greater alertness.  Later, seeking out help within the woods, he tinkers with the antenna to capture a song that the radio is not designed to hear, guiding them to their destination through a fey, fantastical music.  Later still, in the story, music acts as an indispensable part of healing magic.

In “Subterranean Song” (in the Drollerie Press anthology Needles & Bones), a young musician becomes, unwittingly, the reason for a girl’s death, and then must call upon the power of song to protect her spirit in the journey to the afterlife.

In “Behind the Tower” (which will appear in the upcoming Straying from the Path), a drug dealer who looks like Tom Petty uses the Beatles as a metaphor to explain how magic works–based on the balance of Paul McCartney’s discipline and John Lennon‘s untamable weird–while snippets from the radio changing stations foreshadow an inkling of what is going to happen next.

My novel in progress, The Skin We Wear, brings music further into the forefront.  The selkies in the novel respond to song and also influence their world through the power of song.  Moreover, my protagonist–or, more precisely, the one character who seems most to be the hero in an ensemble cast–returns to a musical talent he has forsaken, and through it finds a tenuous peace for himself and also a bit of recognition that will open up doors to him and also tear his family apart.

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Blog tour time

Once again, my fellow Drollerie Press authors and I are doing a blog tour. Mine is posted at Catherine Schaff-Stump’s blog here, and the total list will be up later today at the Drollerie site (I’m still waiting for the post I was supposed to host). So go check ’em!

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Speaking of weird books—

Courtesy of Awful Library Books, the philately title Jewish Chess Masters on Stamps.

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Some days the bear gets you

So having reclaimed Sword of Darcy from limbo (as noted earlier, it got lost when the magazine that took it changed publishers) I’ve resubmitted it twice this month, and gotten a no both times. It went out again a few minutes ago. Unfortunately I realized as soon as I sent it that I hadn’t followed the cover letter guidelines perfectly.

Can a short story be born under an unlucky star?

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Sorry it’s been a while

But vacation, cramming a week of work into three days last week, then another vacation (attending a wedding with TYG) sucked up time and energy. So here’s something amusing: The Weird Book Room on abebooks.com, a used-book site. This section offers such intriguing titles as:

•The Stray Shopping Carts of North America: A Field Identification Guide.

•How to Avoid Big Ships.

•Monk Habits for Everyday People.

•Do-It-Yourself Coffins.

•Cheese Problems Solved.

•Knight Life: Jousting in the United States.

•The Big Book of Lesbian Horse Stories.

Some of these appear to be humorous. Not all.

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Running silent

TYG and I are together for the Labor Day weekend. So I probably won’t post again until Tuesday.

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Why I don’t write many freelance articles

Sunday: Heads Up! returned from Flash Me, with critical commentary (as usual I’ll wait about a week to study it, so I can appreciate if they have valid points instead of reacting with high dudgeon).

Monday: An article on a Southern food-history project returned from Georgia Backroads, with compliments and an invitation to try again when they have more openings for lifestyle pieces (the editor warned me that might be a problem).

This is why I don’t do much in the way of freelance articles any more: Heads Up! can be rewritten (if need be), resubmitted and if nothing else shown off to my friends. There aren’t many places that I can resubmit nonfiction if it’s turned down (there’s lots of markets, but the number suited to any given piece tends to be small) and I can’t really show it off to friends or family.

Up until 2005, I kept plugging at it anyway, because at least theoretically articles bring in more money. In practice … it doesn’t. I’ve never been able to reach the point where it made a serious difference to my income (which wouldn’t take much, believe me), and writing fiction’s more fun.

I started looking at articles again earlier this year because all the nonfiction I did in 2008 for the various online sources had gotten me hooked on making more money. But I don’t think that’s the way to do it (and with Enemies Within under way, I don’t really have the time either).

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